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A magazine who shall remain nameless has shown interest in this piece and others like it that I have written. My problem is, I have one too many commas. Any suggestions would be a blessing.
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I have been improving on this story since 2008. Thanks to all you 'The Last Sermon' may soon be published. I need to cut back on a few things in the other 10 chapters, and tighten up this first chapter. I am searching for a creditable editor, so if you guys are aware of any please let me know. Blessing upon you all.
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. The first two chapter are totally revamped. Take a moment and give "Gargoyles In The Mist" a look see.

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About my story 'Deception.' Sorry, I had to take it down to make some very necessary revisions. But it back up and as always, I hope you like the first chapter.
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A sneak peek into my latest book 'DECEPTION!' If you should so happen that you want to check out my port, please forgive the mess, it's under construction.
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Hope you get something out of this poem.
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I just made a few revision to the words spoken by the character of the nameless, old woman. This is still a work in progress. I would really like to know what you think of 'God's Here' thus far. Thanks!
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I've just edited 'The Maestro's Sorrow'. I wrote this poem purposely as an interpretive piece for the reader. I am amazed at how a few stanzas can mean something different to so many people. And because of it, I am truly happy!
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I've made a few grammatical changes... not many. But, I found these changes helpful.
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