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Dance of Seduction  Open in new Window. (18+)
They shared a once in a life time chance to taste the nectar of something forbidden.


A magazine who shall remain nameless has shown interest in this piece and others like it that I have written. My problem is, I have one too many commas. Any suggestions would be a blessing.
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The Last Sermon: Falling In The Cracks Open in new Window. (13+)
Hester's past never was a bed of roses. Her rebellious son wearily trudges the same road.
I have been improving on this story since 2008. Thanks to all you 'The Last Sermon' may soon be published. I need to cut back on a few things in the other 10 chapters, and tighten up this first chapter. I am searching for a creditable editor, so if you guys are aware of any please let me know. Blessing upon you all.
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Gargoyles In The Mist.. WAR IS IMMINENT  Open in new Window. (18+)
The free world declares war. Is what Tiberius suspects of Morgana and Caesar true?
. The first two chapter are totally revamped. Take a moment and give "Gargoyles In The Mist" a look see.

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About my story 'Deception.' Sorry, I had to take it down to make some very necessary revisions. But it back up and as always, I hope you like the first chapter.
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DECEPTION . . . Chapter 2 Open in new Window. (18+)
"Monsignor, is he a martyr, saint or sadist?" "I don't know. Heaven help us!"
A sneak peek into my latest book 'DECEPTION!' If you should so happen that you want to check out my port, please forgive the mess, it's under construction.
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 A Hustler's Prayer Open in new Window. [13+]
A hustler has a little talk with God.
Hope you get something out of this poem.
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God's Here Open in new Window. [E]
Death, it does come for us all. But what do you do when it's a child so small?

I just made a few revision to the words spoken by the character of the nameless, old woman. This is still a work in progress. I would really like to know what you think of 'God's Here' thus far. Thanks!
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The Nut Cracker Open in new Window. [GC]
Not your everyday adult love story.
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 THE LIVING END Open in new Window. [E]
A woman's true self is unmasked by a friend, in this dark, poetic tale 'The LIVING END'.
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The Nut Cracker Open in new Window. [GC]
Not your everyday adult love story.
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I've just edited 'The Maestro's Sorrow'. I wrote this poem purposely as an interpretive piece for the reader. I am amazed at how a few stanzas can mean something different to so many people. And because of it, I am truly happy!
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 The Maestro's Sorrow Open in new Window. [13+]
Her tempo was slow in movement; his flesh was restless, drove into a sea of no return.
I've made a few grammatical changes... not many. But, I found these changes helpful.
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 A Heavy Heart Open in new Window. [13+]
In remembrance of my nephew Kedrick.
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