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I added a bit, and few small changes to help this flow.
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Word/spell check and myself missed a missing capital in the title........oops
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I realized I needed to up the context (restriction) rating just a shade.
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I had meant to also mention Johnny Cash for inspiration, mainly for the structure. This may be a song someday. *Smile*
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Added a tid bit to the description.
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Continuing my meditation after the butterflies and "Fly! My Beauty" :-)


I adjusted the title - just a little bit - to help it flow from the title to end.
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Changed the intro for this a bit and added a few things things in the last paragraph. A few minor changes I think will help it flow.

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