Very well said, Sue. I agree with life is satisfying once we stop focusing on other's happiness and instead of focusing on ourselves. It was a difficult lesson but one that changed my life.
Oh Wow! I wasn't expecting you to put God as our business partner at the end. I was too busy getting mad at the man in the story who kept the 100%.
Great story plot, btw. You certainly zeroed in on the man's ingratitude effectively. I guess, we all experience a bit of that ingratitude at one time or another in our lives. A big Ooops!
Worst part is to wake up
Each and everyday and face same pain again
Keep the same fake smile again
For the sake of peace
Even though one don’t have it
Go through the same path
Path full of questions
Path full of lies
Sleeping in dry pillow
Only to make it wet with tears
Staying in the darkness
As darkness has never judged one
For this life has now been a huge scenario
For this life tends to be a nightmare full of wolves
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