Very well said, Sue. I agree with life is satisfying once we stop focusing on other's happiness and instead of focusing on ourselves. It was a difficult lesson but one that changed my life.
Oh Wow! I wasn't expecting you to put God as our business partner at the end. I was too busy getting mad at the man in the story who kept the 100%.
Great story plot, btw. You certainly zeroed in on the man's ingratitude effectively. I guess, we all experience a bit of that ingratitude at one time or another in our lives. A big Ooops!
GOA RADIO ORGANISED
COMPETITION FOR POEMS, IN WHICH
THE FIRST LINE MUST BE ROMANTIC,
BUT THE SECOND LINE SHOULD BE THE OPPOSITE.
This was the winning entry sent by Joao Caitan :
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_My darling, my lover, my beautiful wife,_
_Marrying you messed up my life._
_I see your face when I am dreaming,_
_That's why I always wake up screaming._
_Kind, intelligent, loving and hot;_
_This describes everything you are not._
_I love your smile, your face and your eyes,_
_Damn, I'm good at telling lies!_
_My feelings for you, no words can tell,_
_Except for maybe 'Go to hell.'_
_What inspired this amazing rhyme?_
_A bottle of Feni, little Salt n Lime !_
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