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10 Most Recent Blog Comments:

AnotherDreamer

Aug 29, 2024 at 2:25pm
In response to "Unity Begins"

I like your poem and its structure. Your message is strong.

"I’ve been tortured to live without true love." Believe me, I get it. I am 72 and never found it.

"Unity begins through your hearts. Forgiveness begins within yourselves." true...

QPdoll is Grateful

Aug 8, 2024 at 5:56am
In response to "Dreams"

Living in today's world is extremely difficult. It's hard to have and achieve our dreams, in my opinion. It's not that it can't be done, but I think it happens less and less each day.

I like your poem. Nice job.

Spirit🍁🍂Writer

Feb 29, 2024 at 4:41pm
In response to "Forgiveness"

Hi 😊 I saw your poem Lost (on the hub wall) you are an honest and brave soul to share that... I can relate to the subject and wanted to let you know there are other souls out here in WDC land for support. I belong to a good group of folks who deal with anxiety and depression lol!
The little bit of your blog I read shows that you are smart and have right on perception of life.
Just passing through and will read and review soon.
I just got finished with my last assignment in a course here. It was about showing the characters' emotions rather than just telling. I learned a lot from it!
Good place here and have a blessed day buddy!

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Don Dadda

Feb 15, 2024 at 1:04pm
In response to "War solves nothing."

I beg to differ, being trapped in this corrupted focus, one has to play by the rules to survive. Thus the bullshit sayings like " To the victor goes the spoils" and " He with the gold makes all the rules." War, though i agree with you is serious human folly, solves who is on top of the pile at the end of the day, even if it is a pile of shit.

Don Dadda

Feb 3, 2024 at 1:51pm
In response to "Governance "

I agree love is needed to fix the quandry of the system we have in place to govern, but i would add that that love needs to be tempered by Respect. It's hard to act against a person you respect and you don't have to love them to do so.

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Kåre เลียม Enga

Nov 22, 2023 at 7:09am
In response to "Remembrance"

We forget. WW1 is forgotten. WW2 is almost forgotten. Numerous wars in the US lead to a numbness with every death. And once numbed we forget.

We barely embrace our fellow humans. We wage war on all other life-forms. In the end... inhumane humanity will be forgotten. Not all creation-stories have happy endings.

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Kåre เลียม Enga

Nov 10, 2023 at 1:45am
In response to "Laws upon laws warp reason and intent"

Examples come to mind. Observant Jews have hundreds of laws and many spend time obsessing over which ones apply where and when. Switzerland is notorious for rigid laws, as is Singapore.

Simple exhortations like "love thy God, love thyself, love others (especially your enemies)" get drowned out by pedantic nitpickers (example: US Supreme Court).

Kåre เลียม Enga

Nov 10, 2023 at 1:26am
In response to "Homelessness"

Just homeless "heavy" once for two years. It was a daily struggle.

Kåre เลียม Enga

Jun 12, 2023 at 11:06am
In response to "Slavery versus Freedom"

I agree with ideals and goals in spite of what others pursue or block; but, goals without measurable objectives are abstract and 'squishy'.

One example from my experience... I had a bbq in my garden for 15 years on August 28th for MLK's "I Have a Dream" speech. I invited a wide range of people. Usually 30-80 came. I may never know the impact but it was an act I could measure.

Kåre เลียม Enga

May 30, 2023 at 11:52pm
In response to "Gimmie My Hot Cup of Tea"

You obviously write songs! Wish there were more opportunities at WdC for songwriters. I've won in one contest that's now on hiatus.

I was following, until you mentioned GAGA... then I had to pause to laugh. I didn't see that coming.

November 16, 2023 at 12:29pm

#1059577

Can't You All See That I Care?

I’m tired of being a shadow, without any substance,
Working for free, lost to my destiny
Don’t know why I’m suffering so
My love in life weighs heavy upon me

Every thought that I’ve given without any strings without a word from you.
(Calm on the surface, with an inferno burning inside me)

I’ve been set aside
Robbed of my purpose
Sadly, cast adrift
With much more to give
I’ve been set aside
Robbed of my purpose
Sadly, cast adrift
With much more to give

Can’t you all see that this is my destiny?
Set aside sadly, out of great fear.
‘Cause everything that I’ve given for free
Had a hidden cost carried by only me

Every thought I make, every turn I take
(Calm on the surface, with an inferno burning inside me)
As time passes by, robbing me of my destiny.

I’ve been set aside
Robbed of my purpose
Sadly, cast adrift
With much more to give
I’ve been set aside
Robbed of my purpose
Sadly, cast adrift
With much more to give

All I know,
Walking in silence without love is a prison without bars
All I gave,
Was to improve our lives out of love for humanity

I’ve been set aside
Robbed of my purpose
Sadly, cast adrift
With much more to give
I’ve been set aside
Robbed of my purpose
Sadly, cast adrift
With much more to give

Playing life as a game is dumb
Can’t you see that I care?
(Tired of all the hatred cast about in perpetuity)
Playing life as a game is dumb
Can’t you see that I care?
(Tired of all the hatred cast about in perpetuity)

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