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Review Style

My reviews typically cover: initial responses, technicalities and mechanics, favorite parts, areas of improvement, and overall impression.

I'm good at...

Honesty, and finding what works versus what doesn't work. I will never give you a rating I don't think your work deserves. I am also particularly good at spotting grammatical errors and typos.

Favorite Genres

Philosophy, Steampunk, Horror, Dark, Emotional, Science Fiction, Technology, and Political Science. I'm sure there are more that I'm missing.

Least Favorite Genres

Romance, Western, Religious, and anything froufrou.

I will not review...

Chapters and Novels, unless arrangements are made prior.

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#3216039

Review of To you

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Rated: E

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A serious writer is not to be confounded with a solemn writer. A serious writer may be a hawk or a buzzard or even a popinjay, but a solemn writer is always a bloody owl.

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Hey once again, Lonewolf !

I am reviewing "To you"

- Below are my thoughts on your work.

I really like how every other line begins with My love for you... in a repetative fashion. I noticed as I read this a couple of times that you have simple punctuation here and there, but in other parts it's lacking.

For instance, in stanza one My love for you is like an ocean/it goes down so deep is one sentence and worthy of a period at the end. If you were to do this, it would only make sense to start line 3 with a capital letter. You could do the same with all the other stanzas - especially in the last where it's a comma in line two as opposed to the period.

I also noticed that you had a distinct pattern for rhyming: A/B/C/B in the first stanza, A/B/C/B in the second, but when I got to the third I wasn't sure which rhyme you were going for: A/B/C/?/? - If you're looking to keep the similar pattern, then forever/surrender would be the rhyming words, but they're not an exact match like the rest. I found that the very last line of this was strong and perhaps even worthy of its own ending stanza by itself.

Overall, I really liked this poem. Thank you very much for letting me read through your port. I've enjoyed my stay so much.

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Riot

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#3216016

Review of For the daughter I'll have

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Rated: E

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A serious writer is not to be confounded with a solemn writer. A serious writer may be a hawk or a buzzard or even a popinjay, but a solemn writer is always a bloody owl.

Congratulations on your recent nomination to "Ink Blot Hall of Fame" by kiyasama.
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Hello again, Lonewolf !

As I was browsing through your poetry folder, I came across "For the daughter I'll have"

. Below are my thoughts on this poem.

I want to start off by saying that I think this poem started off very strong. The overall sentiments behind the poem are extremely sweet and the poem depicts the loving thoughts an excited father-to-be may experience.

As I read through the poem a couple of times, there were a few things I noticed. The first one is very minor, but was noticable to me. In the first two lines, they're broken up even though they're a couplet. I found it to stick out because none of the others did. While there's no steadfast rule on these having to be close together, I would've personally expected it at the end.

The second thing I noticed was that your rhymes were really good, but as I got to the third to last, second to last, and last stanza, they seemed a bit more slack.

thin/friend - I don't see this as a matching rhyme

clay/everyday - This actually does rhyme. The reason I point it out here is because every other rhyme you've made in the couplet matches syllabic-wise too, except this one.

end/grin - Cute, really, but not really a true rhyme as your others were.

Overall, I think with a little bit of work, that this could be perfect. Obviously a lot of care and effort has already gone into it. It's very sweet and any daughter coming your way is lucky to have such a thoughtful and caring father. Excellently done!

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Riot

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#3216005

Review of My Survival

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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A serious writer is not to be confounded with a solemn writer. A serious writer may be a hawk or a buzzard or even a popinjay, but a solemn writer is always a bloody owl.

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Hello there, Lonewolf !

I am reviewing "My Survival"

- Below are my thoughts on your work.

I wasn't expecting this from the title, but that doesn't mean it wasn't fitting. I found the title drawing me in, because it got me curious as to what you were surviving. Was it life? Was it an accident? Was it something else?

The first two stanzas of this appear to be three couplets one after another, while the last stanza is two. The syllable count for the first stanza was 10/12/10/11/10/8 and stanza two was 12/12/11/12/13/7/8 and finally the last 11/12/12/12. As I read through this poem I felt like there was a little disruption in the flow. While sometimes this is due to awkward words, in this case I believe it's because the syllables are a tiny bit off.

The use of episode leaves me unsure. The full first line it's used in, I think I kind of understand what you're saying, but then I have some doubt. When it's brought up again in the last line, I understand it's context a little bit better.

My favorite part about this poem that you've written is the absolutely raw emotions you project into it. I think it takes a lot of courage for someone to write something so personally dark and emotional. I think you've captured a really strong emotion of self blame with this poem, that speaks from truth. Thank you for sharing it with us, and great job!

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Riot

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#3214766

Review of Grow your manhood here?

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Rated: 18+

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Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.

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Heyas, Just call me Omni - I decided to peek through your port some more this morning, and I came across a nook of a folder with a single item in it. Below are my thoughts on your comical poem, "Grow your manhood here? " .

Firstly, I want to say that you have a nice use of italics here! I think that a lot of times when people do poetry, they forget the many different ways you can present your poem. What I like best about this, is how you seemingly tell a story in a commercial style setting. I think I can safely say, that I have never seen a poem like this before!

Overall, I found this to be a very humorous read and worthy of it's second place win in the contest it was submitted into. (Maybe more, but I haven't read the first place winner.

)

Aside from being in the category "Erotica" (which I'm not sure about) - I think that this was a well written poem that made me chuckle outloud. Well done!

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Riot

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#3214761

Review of The Lost Journeys

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Rated: E

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Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia.

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Heyas, once again, Euclid79 ! I am reviewing "The Lost Journeys" - Below are my thoughts on your work.

This poem reminds me a lot of those that contemplate the past. The "what if's" that could have been, the things that never were. In the opening paragraph, I'm made to contemplate. I think this is very good, because it's only usually after a poem is complete that I really sit and feel the full effects of it. I was pleasantly surprised.

I feel like there was supposed to be something "more" to this poem. I can't help but feel that Held her gaze a little longer... line was intended to be the centerpiece of the poem - and maybe it was. However, that being said, I found it remarkably insightful. The ending wraps around like the beginning, referring to the reminder of what may have been.

Overall, I think this was a pretty good poem. Thank you for sharing it!

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Riot

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#3214753

Review of Ramblings of a Crazy Man

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Hey again, Euclid79 ! While browsing your port I came across an older entry of yours, called "Ramblings of a Crazy Man" .

Firstly, I just want to say that I'll agree with the "Nonsense" category that you've put on this poem!

At first when I read this through, I was trying to think of analogies that would fit the tree growing out of the writer's ear. Unfortunately, I was unable to. I think that it was intentionally written this way, to be a silly and comical aspect of the story. In fact, it really reminded me a lot of Dr. Seuess. I liked the story of the little ant. I think that you incorperated a vital and important message into that, hidden away by the silliness, that's very true.

Overall, this was a very silly and nonsense-riddled poem (as stated in the genres) but amidst the perplextion, it did make me smile. Thank you for sharing it with us!

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Riot

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#3214738

Review of Sanctuary

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Hello there, Euclid79 !

I am reviewing "Sanctuary"

- Below are my thoughts on your work.

I think this is a very good couplet. Not only have you followed true rhymes to each stanza, but you've also matched them up with their syllabic count spot on. As far as patterns and structures go, I did notice that in stanzas 2, 4, 6, 8 the lines start with the same two words. I think this is very clever and well thought out!

What I also like about your poem is that the previous stanza is a buildup to the next. Sometimes with poetry, even structured poetry, there is not a real set up, just flow from line to line. In your poem, I saw a lot more.

Overall, I thought this was a very good read. It gave me a lot to think about, something to ponder over my morning coffee. That is, I suppose, the sanctuary of my mind. Thank you for sharing.

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Riot

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#3212717

Review of The Write Place

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Rated: E

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Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.

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Heyas, Just call me Omni !

I am reviewing "The Write Place"

- Your guide to everything in your folder.

I was looking through your port, and saw under your guest book that you have a main folder to all the stuff in your port. When I clicked on it, I was greeted with an asthetically appealing banner to "The Write Stuff" and a welcome message.

I think that this folder is well organized and easy to navigate. The added colors and buttons make everything on your page pop out. I think it's a really good idea how you have all your activities listed at the top in one easy to navigate fashion. I also like how your folders are organized.

Overall, I think you've done a pretty good job at personalizing your port and I found it very inviting to those that may navigate it.

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Keep Writing!
Riot

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#3212206

Review of Lonesome

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Hello once again, Noelle !

I am reviewing "Lonesome"

- Below are my thoughts on your work.

I don't think that I have ever experimented with Lanette sonnet, personally (and I'm really not sure of the rules) but from what I can tell this poem was really good. I noticed that in the first stanza, line three, you have Halo capitalized. While I think that some words are capitalized for emphases, I felt that since there were no other words capitalized in this manner that it sort of stuck out a bit.

The imagery in the poem was quite beautiful. I liked the phrases flash of cheerful laughter and seated kin surrounding supper's feast in the first stanza, and Fenced by the distance between those I love and teased with a single fleeting visit in the last part. I think a lot of holiday memories stem from sitting around a table and you've pegged these emotions well, including the last bitter part of loneliness that all too many experience on days like this.

Overall, I felt this was a pretty good poem and I enjoyed the read. I wonder what the image used to be (it says at the top it's not an image) and how that would've impacted the poem, if at all. Great job with all your writing, it's been a pleasure reading through your port tonight!

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Riot

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#3212204

Review of Cold Torture

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Hello again, noellesce!

I am reviewing "Cold Torture"

- Below are my thoughts on your work.

All I can say is, "Yikes!" - I can definitely see how this won honorable mention in the Writer's Cramp for worst physical pain a character can experience. When I first started reading it, I had no idea where this story was going. Then, look out! There it was.

I really thought this was well written. The dialogue on the beginning, along with the build up from her best friend Kelly, really added to the story and helped me to sympathise with Francine, the main character. While I was suprised at the means of death for her husband, I still feel you had a lot of really good foreshadowing and prefigure. You introduced the murder weapons very early on and tied them in very nicely with the story. (Well, as nicely as you can considering she murdered him, heh.)

Overall, this was a good read. While it's rather... dark and kind of gave me the shivers, I found it to be well written and executed well. I couldn't find any flaws or errors in the entire document, though I do wonder a little bit if the phone conversation in the beginning should be split into more paragraphs. Keep up the excellent work!

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Riot

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#3212196

Review of Dear Me

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Hello there, Noelle !

I am reviewing "Dear Me"

- Below are my thoughts on this magnificant and inspiring letter to yourself.

I think the theme of this motivational letter to yourself is great. I like how you included an acrostic for the word "MINE" at the top and explain all of your goals. What I like best is that you included a bit about how to inspire others as well, through reviewing, which I find highly inspiring and very satisfactory myself! Two reviews a day is easy pie on paper, but it can be daunting if you miss a day or three. So, don't overwhelm yourself!

As far as the layout goes with this letter, I really like how you've put blue star bulletins next to all your highlighting points. It's really easy to read, and there isn't any overwhelming crazy size jumbos in there.

Overall, I found this to be a highly inspiring piece of work. It's no wonder that you have a ribbon on it! I'm not sure how all of your goals worked out this year, but I hope as December nears you're happy with what you've done. Scanning through your port, it's very obvious that you're active and doing a good job with all your writing and projects. Keep up the excellent work!

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Riot

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#3211499

Review of Poetic Flow

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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piewhackett1,

Firstly, I'd like to say that I think it's wonderful that you've mastered such an art with putting words together, on a poem that's about poetry and flow. I really thought that it was a good read, however I did notice that there were a few parts that were very similar and repeatative. For instance, in Stanza Two, Line 1, You say The stanzas contain feelings from the heart and then in Stanza Three, Line 1, you say Each line is a part of feelings in the heart - While I appreciate the sentiments of both lines, I would suggest perhaps changing one of them to vary a little bit more, yet keep the same sentiments.

Overall, I felt this was a good and worthy read. I share your opinions on everything you've said. Excellent job.

Riot

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#3211497

Review of Scream!

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Rated: 18+

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staiNed

,

As you probably know, I am a big fan of darker poetry and writing. Not because I am a "dark" person myself, but because I can appreciate the value of purging emotions and those that recognize that we all have feelings of insecurities, hurt, and yearnings. I couldn't help but thinking, while reading this poem, that it almost sounds lyrical. I think that the elipses (which, in my opinion, is good at three dots) and the harsh breaks, along with the emphasized text, would really make a strong part if this were a song.

However, being that it is not a song, I think it is still a very good poem, especially for a free-verse. I didn't have any problems reading this as far as flow or rhythm was concerned. I have a hard time saying what my favorite part of this is, because it's all very good in its own right. However, the line I scream, shriek, till my lungs bleed really struck me as I read through this. I can only remember one time where I ever screamed so loud it felt like this.

Overall, I think this was executed really well. As an author, you successfully put me in a mind set of times where I myself have felt like this. It's not a comfortable place to be in, but I'm very impressed that you were able to evoke such an emotion from me.

Riot

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#3207308

Review of The Ouija

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Rated: 13+

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🌖 HuntersMoon , heyas!

I think I can honestly say that I've never seen a poem of this nature, executed so well. When I saw the image at the top (which is very fitting by the way) I had no idea that this would be such a potent political poem.

To me, that was the best part about this entire poem - the fact that you actually made this into a rhyming poem, with the theme of Halloween and fright, but also pegged the economic crises so well. My favorite stanza would have to be six and seven, but I did find the introduction to be a very good tease to what this poem was all about.

Overall, I think this is simply wonderful.

Riot
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#3207306

Review of Adult

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Rated: 18+

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I am a Helping Hearts reviewer. Somebody has generously gifted you some reviews, which I'll be happily filling for you.

🌖 HuntersMoon , heyas again!

One of the things I'm supposed to do, in filling this package for you, is to award a pink awardicon to the item that I like best. I started with the main part of your port, but realized most of the more popular work by you has already been deservingly awarded. So I found the first folder without an awardicon and clicked.

As I browsed through this port, I skimmed through some of the items inside. All I have to say is wow! I may need a cold shower.

Therefore, it's in this reviewer's humble opinion, that this is one of my favorite things from you. Not only are you graced with writing this topic well, but you have also had a lot of experience with it given the quantity in this folder.

Thank you for sharing!

Riot
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#3207243

Review of WDC Mom

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Rated: E

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Ida_Matilda_Wright Help

,

When I came into your port, I stumbled across this lovely poem. I'll be honest in that the bright pink is a bit hard to read, but it wasn't so bad that it detracted from anything. I was interested in reading this poem because of your introduction that stated it was a tribute to your internet mother.

I think the introduction stanza to your poem is very well posed in that you ask the reader what a mother is. As I read what your feelings were on the matter, I agreed. I have known people like this one the site. The first two that come to my mind: SHERRI GIBSON

and GabriellaR45

... who really fit into the category of caring and loving people you mention here.

Overall, I think this is an excellent poem. I think the ending was really strong and gave closure to everything you had to say, on a large up-note.

Happy WdC Account Anniversary from all of us at "Anniversary Reviews ~ Summer Break"

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#3207233

Review of Just Take The Time

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Rated: E

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Daizy May

,

I found this to be a very simple, yet touching poem, perfect for the upcoming holidays. The fact that you did not clutter this with large and fanciful words, in my opinion, makes it better. I think that the title is very appropriate, as it is also the last line of the poem and the overall message of it. I have struggled in the past to see the optimistic parts of life - and I think you pegged them very well here. It's always a pleasure to read you.

Riot

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#3206619

Review of White Case Memorial

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Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia.

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kiyasama,

I am reviewing "White Case Memorial"

- I am deeply saddened by this forum, but also highly inspired at the caring nature of those that helped create it.

When I first joined this site, I had little idea of how much I would become involved in it. As I grew to love it more and more, I realized what a really poignant part it played in my life. I suppose I never really thought anything happened to somebody's port when they passed on, until I joined a group that "rated" white-cases work.

Recently, a chat-friend passed away. She was known as RachelD on the site. Her portfolio no longer exists per her request. However, I remember when she passed away (just recently) and I remember other friends of mine who have been very close to people on this site who have passed. Reading through this forum, there are a lot of inspirational people no longer with us.

I can think of no other way to be more honorable and respectful than this forum you have created. It's from the bottom of my heart when I say that this is extremely touching.

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Riot

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#3204902

Review of Me and My Worlds

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Hey there, Dr Matticakes Myra

!

I was browsing through your port and saw that your Anniversary was November 8th. Sorry I missed it! Seven years, wow! That's a really long time.

I really like this port and how you've arranged and themed it. The only thing I did notice though, was there's a {size} tag at the very end. I don't know if it's spaced improperly, or if you may have added an extra bracket somehow.

As for the folders inside, I think they're neatly organized. I took a quick peek at what was inside and so far I like what I see very much. Great job!

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews ~ Summer Break"

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#3203162

Review of Pink

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Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before.

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So glad I checked this!

I was scouring your port to try and find something I hadn't seen before. Then I came across this folder. When I opened it I was surprised to see not one, or two, but three cNote shops. Full, too! The "You Did Well" note in "A Spoonful Of Care" is my favorite, I think. I have a thing for rainbows.

One of the things I noticed is that the introductions to your shops are decked out nearly as much as your forums and groups are! This kinda made me sad, because I was expected to be bombarded with pleasant font colors. I wasn't too disappointed though, because the images were all outstanding. I can see you're very big into anime!

Overall, I think these are some really beautiful and affordable cNotes. I think if you were to put an explanation of how they work at the top, they would be just about perfect!

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#3203139

Review of Blue

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Rated: 13+

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Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before.

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Hello there, again, mARi😭DiagnosedDepression !

I really like how you've decorated this folder. The light blue and violet rotating letters really brings out the title and the color scheme is attractive to the eyes. The way you have your folder split up is in an easy to follow and organized fashion. The fact that you mix "impact" font with regular fonts for the links also brings out the titles more.

Overall, I think this is an excellent folder of work. I know that I have had a great time reading your work from this folder. Maybe on another glance I'll find something else I can read! Rest assured it isn't for lack of content, but rather I've rated so much from you already.

In the meantime, keep up the great work and know that you have special fans from all of us at Ink Blot authors.

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Keep Writing!
Riot

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Review of Education or Health- Which comes first?

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Rated: E

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I thought this was a very interesting article, however the first thing that popped to my mind when I was finished reading it is that I'd like to see more. Maybe not more in the sense of expanding the actual idea, but filling it in more with more information. As far as the sentiments of this article goes, I highly agree that a lot of pressure is put on academics and the students going through them. You need your health!

Riot

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Review of Polynesia Kiss

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Rated: E

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This poem is riddled with visual delight! I think you did a very good job. I did get stuck at one part though, in the very first line. I'm not sure what 'amberris' is. The mysterious blossom unfolding in the sudden dawn... is my favorite by far. In stanza three I smile, because you finally introduce her by something I can depict in my head. I found the second to last stanza to be extremely well written, even though it is a tiny bit longer than the rest. Wrapping it up with the two line ending, I smile. Great poem!

Riot

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Review of Panic Switch Misery

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Rated: 13+

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The whole twins aspect of this eerily reminds me of The Shining for some reason. I don't think it's meant to, but that's what popped into my head.

It's mentioned a lot that the person going through this doesn't really believe he's in Hell. (I think you should capitalize it, since it's being made a reality.)

Near the end I liked how you described things. Especially when you were referring to Lucifer pulling the strings. "Saw" should be capitalized though, since it's a movie title.

Overall, I felt this was pretty decent. I love the creepy vibes from it!

Riot

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Review of Muse

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Rated: 18+

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I found this short story to be wonderfully well written and articulate. I'm extremely envious of the talented way you have strung some of these words together.

Some of my favorites:

Stepping to the New Releases, his cold blue eyes raked over the holiday glut with thinly veiled revulsion.

Nibbling on a saucer-sized sugar cookie, Jess surreptitiously surveyed the store.

The menace in his baritone and icy certainty of his gaze made Jess backpedal, masking her retreat by turning to seek the warmth of the fire.

The ending of this was absolutely perfect with the quote.

Keep up the excellent work! I can offer no improvements that would do this piece any justice.

Riot