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I believe in constructive criticism and honesty. I can adapt my review style to fit the kind of feedback an author is looking for (e.g., developmental suggestions, fine-tuning, proofreading, etc.), but will always try to be as encouraging and helpful as possible.
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Plotting, characterization, dialogue, structure/pacing, and professional considerations. I can also do serviceable technical editing/proofreading, but I'm much better with developmental/creative feedback.
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I read almost everything. I particularly love genre fiction (mystery/thriller and science fiction/fantasy especially) and nonfiction of all kinds.
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
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Hello Weirdone-Back in the games

Thank you for taking the time to enter the February 2025 round of the "Quotation Inspiration: Official ContestOpen in new Window..

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Positives

I'll admit, I definitely didn't see this take on the prompt coming. *Laugh* I really love the originality of the premise; it was a clever use of the prompt and definitely one that stands out.


Suggestions

The piece read less like a story and more like a comedic bit or one-note joke. I would have loved to have seen a little more narrative and character development overlaid into the basic structure of the setup and punchline.


Overall

Overall, this was a fast, fun read that I really enjoyed and found quite memorable. Nicely done!


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Review of Demons of Science  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello Damon Nomad

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Positives

I really enjoyed this story. I thought you did a great job weaving historical details into the narrative and telling a big, important story while still managing to focus on those small character choices that made it feel relatable and engaging. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a great job with this story. Well done!


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Review of The Album  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
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Hello LightinMind

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Positives

I thought you did a good job with this story. The worldbuilding and the character development was solid, and it was well-written and the plot moved along at a brisk pace. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed reading your entry. Great job!


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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello StephBee

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Positives

I really liked your worldbuilding. The character development and setting were clear and unique, and I thought you had a solid take on the prompt.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed reading this story. You have a solid contest entry here. *Smile*


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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Positives

I enjoyed the structure of this piece. I thought you did a great job outlining a compelling narrative with characters that engage the reader. Nice job!


Suggestions

I think some additional detail and description would really help this piece stand out. It felt like more of a synopsis or a summary, largely to do parts where the narrative is generalized (like, "Malik faced numerous challenges. Along the way, he encountered mythical creatures and wise elders who tested his courage and determination." I would have loved to see those scenes play out rather than just having them summarized after the fact.


Overall

Overall, I think you have a great foundation for a compelling story. The execution needs to be fleshed out a bit, but you're off to a great start! *Smile*


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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Positives

This was a thought-provoking piece. In only a few sentences you were able to articulate a difference (as well as similarities) between computers and humans with a surprisingly deep philosophical response. Nice job!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement, although I would love to read a piece that expands on your thoughts here a bit and fleshes it out a little more.


Overall

Overall, this was an enjoyable read. Nicely done!


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Review of War Atomized  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Positives

I thought you did a great job with the imagery in this piece. In just a few short lines, you communicated a lot of visuals and created a compelling narrative, which is not easy to do. Nice job!


Suggestions

I was a little confused by the "my life lights sky pistons by control" line. For me, I had a difficult time conceptualizing that as an image.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed reading your poem. Well done!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I really liked the structure and the pacing of this piece. The imagery was also excellent, which created a feeling of a solid, well-rounded poem.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. It was well written, easy to read, and memorable. Well done!


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Rated: E | (2.5)
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Positives

I'm impressed by the way you were able to tell a complete story with a beginning, middle, and resolution in only three sentences. That's very impressive, especially considering that you were able to resolve the narrative with a surprising ending.


Suggestions

I think some more specificity in this piece would help clarity. "A man who talks about promises and other good stuffs" and "couples of balls" and other generic references leave the reader a little confused about what's specifically happening in the story.


Overall

Overall, I think there's a ton of potential in a micro-fiction story like this, although I think there's an opportunity to add a bit of clarity and polish to really make it stand out. Nice work!


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Review of Sky watching  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Positives

I liked the way you addressed different types of sky in this piece, from the day to the nighttime. It gave the work a really cohesive, thematic tone that worked really well for it.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

I thought you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Positives

I thought you did a great job of packing a lot of narrative into a comparatively short piece. I also really liked the introduction to this piece, where you tell the reader at the outset that some of the things you're about to say are true, and some are not. That's a great way to capture the reader's attention!


Suggestions

I thought the pacing and delivery could have been improved a bit. While there's a lot of action that happens in this story, it's all told with a bit of a one-note, detached style that doesn't give the reader a sense of which details are important, when the tension should increase, etc.


Overall

I think you have a great foundation for a story here. The basic narrative elements are there, and they just need to be finessed a little to really make the story stand out. Nice work!


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Review of Writer's Block  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Positives

I thought you did a great job capturing the feeling of wrestling with writer's block. The poem was evocative and clear, with vivid imagery. Well done!


Suggestions

There were a couple of small imperfect rhymes (hand/demands, blank/tanked), and I thought calling it "dear Writer's Block" toward the end of the poem contrasted a bit with the otherwise negative connotations you're eliciting.


Overall

Overall, this was a creative, well-written poem. Nice work!


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for entry "Summer - HaikuOpen in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
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*Train* Positives

I thought you did a great job with the imagery in this poem. Each line was vibrant and descriptive and really helped paint a picture for the reader. Well done!


*Train* Suggestions

While the sensory details were excellent, I didn't get a distinct sense of which season is represented here other than the clue from the prompt and the title. This could be due to the fact that our associations are different, but "parched earth" is the only thing that for me speaks of summer, as "birdsong" is more associated with spring (at least to me). And I'm hopeless with seasonal fruits, so I'll just have to take your word for it that mangoes are a summer fruit! *Laugh*

Seriously, though, my only real quibble with the piece is that if the goal is to capture a season in the form of a haiku, I'd perhaps want to select things that are more unmistakably "summer" in nature so that the seasonality comes though in the poem itself as well as the title.


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Overall, I thought this was an enjoyable poem with great description and just a bit of room for improvement in terms of more fully capturing the seasonal prompt in the poem itself.


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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hi JCosmos

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Positives

I enjoyed this poem. I thought it was short, evocative, and told a story which is not easy to do in so few words. Nicely done!


Suggestions

I found the repetition of the lines ending with "drinking" to be a little repetitive, especially since the second line of the poem already communicates that a "wild night of drinking" occurred, which makes the line about Sam Adams "starting drinking" to feel like a bit of a redundancy.


Overall

Overall, this was an entertaining read. Good work!


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Review of Scarlet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello iKïyå§ama

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Positives

The detail and description in your story was excellent, creating a vivid and specific image in the reader's mind. I also thought the character development and the dialogue were realistic and engaging.


Suggestions

The "horror/scary" elements of this genre piece felt a little muted. For me, the genre more than anything is defined by an atmosphere of tension, dread, etc. and I didn't get as much of that as I was hoping from a story written for a Horror/Supernatural prompt where something "scary or spooky" was going on. I would have loved for those genre elements to really be exploited a little more.


Overall

Overall, this was a solid, well-written story with excellent detail description and good character work. Nice job!


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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello Amethyst Angel 🌼

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Positives

I liked the worldbuilding in this story. You did a great job of packing a lot of setting and narrative into just a few hundred words. Nice job!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, this was a fun read. Nice work! Thanks for entering the contest!


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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
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Hello No Sox with Sandals

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Positives

I liked the action and the description in this piece. The pace moved along nicely and the characters were interesting. Well done!


Suggestions

While following the prompts of other contests is beyond the scope of judging criteria for "The Bradbury ContestOpen in new Window., I did note that the prompt for that contest was Horror/Scary and it was one of the selected three genres of the piece as well. On that front, I'm not sure it was successful; there was very little that was creepy, scary, suspenseful, or horrifying about the narrative. Supernatural, sure... but it was missing that tense, dread atmosphere that I associate with pieces in the horror/scary genre.


Overall

Overall, this was a fun read. Thank you for entering the contest!


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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello Spud

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Positives

I enjoyed the worldbuilding and the setting in this story in particular. The sci-fi elements are worked into the narrative well, without being too distracting or pulling focus from the story.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed the read. Well done!


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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello Angelica Weatherby- July 4th

Thank you for taking the time to enter the January 2025 round of the "The Bradbury ContestOpen in new Window..

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Positives

I enjoyed the characterization in this story. Terry and Thunder were both fun, intriguing characters that were entertaining to follow along with throughout the narrative.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, this was a fun read. Nice work!


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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hello Rhyssa

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Positives

You did a great job developing story and keeping the pacing moving along through dialogue in this story. It was only about 800 words and it read much faster than that. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job on this piece. Nice work!


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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hello 💙 Carly: poems & novel

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Positives

I thought you did a great job with this story, particularly the way you depicted some really sensitive topics. They were handled with a deft touch and were really compelling. Nicely done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, this was a really good read. Nice work!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I really enjoyed this poem. I thought you did a great job with the imagery and the structure of the piece. The stanzas were short and concise and allowed the piece to be read in smaller bits and pieces that all complemented one another.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I love discovering new features of the site, and somehow I missed this one a couple years back. I had no idea you could create automatic responses based on submitted reviews! *Cool*


Suggestions

No suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, this is a super cool feature!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I really loved the imagery in this piece. The first stanza, in particular, was a beautiful metaphor comparing the soul to a wilted flower.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. It was vivid, concise, and well written. Nice work!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Positives

I really enjoyed this poem. I thought the structure and the imagery were particularly well done, and I thought your use of descriptive language really made this poem stand out.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a good job with this poem. Well done!


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