Oh, my word. I really disliked this book. There is a wonderful concept here: magic and love with a little paranormal thrown into the mix. It promised so much. But, unfortunately, it did not deliver.

My main problem was the author’s writing ability. I mean, it felt incredibly amateur. I wonder whether she has ever had a writing lesson or been told about the importance of showing a story. I don’t think there’s one part of the story that is shown. Not. One.

I did like the story a little more the closer it got to the end. My interest increased. However, the tire story is a series of almost-identical tram rides in which nothing really happens.

I like the magical and paranormal aspects. But the writing itself, not good.

The magic. When I finished it.

The author’s poor writing habits.

Needs to work on her skills.

It’s not good.

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