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Since March 4, 2005
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Here is where I will post pieces about which I would like some feedback, mostly for school assignments. If you could please leave me your most critical feedback, I would really appreciate it! Please don't be afraid to be brutal. I need that.
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    Tryst  Open in new Window.
    Rated: 13+ · Military · #1495681
    Two soldiers, breaking military law. Sexy. Please leave critical feedback!
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    Busted  Open in new Window.
    Rated: 13+ · Fanfiction · #1490887
    Shortened to 750 words. Please review! How is the style? Can you follow the events?
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    Hollow at the Core  Open in new Window.
    Rated: E · Animal · #945656
    Written for school. Please let me know where its weak or if you have suggestions. Thanks!
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