Hey, the pen name's Nathaniel Roland, and I've been told that I write better than Stephenie Meyer. That does sound a bit far fetched, but if three people (completely unrelated) have told me that, there has to be something to it. Or they're all completely insane. I'm a 17 year old semi-avid writer hoping to have at least one book published in his lifetime. But to do that, I need truthful reviews of my writing. So bring on the criticism, I can take it.