Looking for feedback on my writing, working towards improvement as always. I enjoy reviewing, and I hope that my suggestions help others. I enjoy this website, it's active, friendly, and already have learned from the experience. I have a series of books for children I've been working on, and am close hunting an agent for them. I'm a married mom of two boys, and currently unemployed. I live in south Florida. I love comedy, (I think it's the most difficult genre to pull off) and am a sucker for the epiphany.