Hey my name is Jesse and I am a young writer of the age of 16. I write poems, short stories, song lyrics and i'm currently writing my first book. I would appreciate any comment and feedback anyone has on my items and any advice on making my work better and just writing in general. My dad is my mentor with my writing, has been the subject of some of my writing and has even written a book himself. Here is the link for you all. You should check it out. http://www.lulu.com/product/file-download/a-lonely-heart/6355396?productTracking...