I love writing stories and poetry. Please let me know what you think of my stories and poems, and tell me what I did well and what I can do better. I seriously appreciate all constructive criticism. My name's Tom, so if you want to call me something less silly than majestic moose, feel free! Also,I do accept commissions. If you want me to write something, feel free to contact me For those who are interested, I have a fiction press account, there you can see some of my other works. https://www.fictionpress.com/u/1024927/heaven719