Hello. I am writing a medieval fantasy story with some steampunk elements. I am looking for honest and occasionally brutal critiques of my writing. If there is something you think is nonsensical, please tell me! Chapters are subject to change quite often... even Chapter I, as I figure out better ways to communicate details of the story. I am planning to upload a new chapter once a month, each time I do so I will undoubtedly have changed things in previous chapters. I will be checking for comments and messages almost daily so if you have a question, I will do my best to answer you promptly!