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Rated: ASR · Poetry · Family · #873202
Dedicated to a friend who's had some rough times.
hold on
you're right
age doesn't equal
intelligence

clean your room, then
leave the house.
do it.
NOW.

abuse?
no.
but it sure as hell
isn't right

somewhere, I'm sure
beneath commands, maybe
there's some emotion.
love?

for now, hold on
I see, I know
and it sure as hell
isn't right
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