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Rated: 18+ · Campfire Creative · Fiction · Romance/Love · #860232
wHeN lOvE hItS iT hItS hArD! a VaMpIrE's StOrY.
[Introduction]
This is a vampire story. It was totally and 100% tombraider's idea. We thought we'd try something new.

***It is possible to change your character's name if you wish to do so please contact me and I will change it for you. Hurry!***

The characters are:

Jason - Vampire, 19 falls in love with Kennedy. His family does not like this and forbides it because they want to steal the power from Kennedy's family.

Ann - TAKEN - Vampire, 18. Turned the vampire hunter's sister into a vampire. Falls for Brad.

Kennedy - TAKEN - Vampire royalty, 19. Jasons family is trying to kill hers for power. Falls for Jason.

Brad - TAKEN - Vampire Hunter trying to kill Ann and Kyle and their whole family to get revenge for his sister, 20. Falls for Ann.

Kyle- Ann's older brother vampire, 20. Falls hard for Ebony.

Ebony - TAKEN - Brad's younger sister, 18. She was turned into a vampire by Ann so Brad wants revenge. Likes Kyle.


No rules just make it interesting.
NAME: Ann

AGE: 18

PERSONALITY: The power from being a vampire has made her a little cocky and over confident. She underestimates Brad's power. Otherwise she is charming and nice for a vampire. She usually goes to the point of near starvation before she feeds on humans just to save a life or two. This means when she is very hungry she is at her weakest point. The hunger drives her and she has no mercy for those she kills.

APPEARANCE: Very pale like most vampires. Her deep, crystal aqua colored eyes are very bright and noticable. She has shoulder length silky dark brown hair cut layered. She is slim and slender but not very curvy. She has a beautiful face with flawless skin and it usually has an innocent look to it.

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I turned the corner in a dark alley. If I was still alive my stomach would growl in a hungry pain. It got worse as I continued but I stopped upon hearing voices. This could be my chance. I didnt want to feel so hungry anymore.

"I would die for her!" Said a young teenage boy.

I started forward licking my lips but stopped when hearing the mother's voice.

"Dont be silly you're already dead."

My shoulders slumped disappointed I headed towards a booming music filled club. The perfect place. A girl and an older guy were standing together looking out on the dance floor.

The girl looked perfect. I would have taken the guy but I was to weak to fight much. I heard them talking and found their names to be Brad and Ebony. Wonderful names, wonderful meals.

I quickly bought a drink eyeing the girl and guy. He was a very good looking human. I shook my head and walked towards them.

"Oh! I'm so sorry!" I said spilling the drink down the guy's arm.

"Its fine really. I'll just go get cleaned." He said, we made eye contact and I couldnt pull away.

How strange. When he was gone I smiled and looked at the girl. Then put on a face.

"Oh my...are you Ebony? Someone was looking for you. They said they really wanted to see you again. I'm supposed to send the message on." I said pointing to the alley not far away.

She came but when we reached the dark alley she stopped.

"Where are we going? No human on earth would want to meet mein their." She said with disgust.

My, much smarter than I thought.

"Honey, I'm no human." I said revealing teeth.

Before she had time to escape I sunk them into the side of her neck. I took just enough to fill my hunger and turn her into a vampire. Was it better than death? I had not wanted to kill this one. She sunk to the ground slowly.

Her brother would certainly look for her but I did not intend to leave her here.
Name: Ebony

Age: 18

Personality: fiery and compassionate. Very caring and kind, but can be way too critical of herself. She is a free spirit and loves music a lot.

Appearance: Wavy black hair. Most of the time the top half of her hair is pulled back in a bun, and the bottom half is left down so it will curl. Gorgeous blue eyes and a nice complexion. Tall and pleasantly curvy.

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I slid to the ground wish a small moan and fell forward from my knees. The darkness was all around me and I let myself drown in it. It was sweet and seemed to take away all the pain...
NAME: Kennedy

AGE: 19.

PERSONALITY: She loves the blood. Everything about it. She also loves the fact shes immortal. Being able to do anything with no reprecusions is fantasic. Other than that shes funny and loves to pull pranks. She never kills the young though. She loves to smile and laugh and have fun.

APPEARANCE: Pale of course just not ghostly white. She has vibrant green eyes. She has short brown hair thats layered that flips outwards and sweeps in front of her face quite dramatically. and since shes dead it never grows.Shes about 5'4'' and has an hourglass figure.
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I sat at a large table with a wine glass filled with blood. In front of me sat the remains of what was a large turkey (hey just because they're vampires doesnt mean they cant eat). My father stood up to make a toast.

"To the peace between our two familes." he said. We had a family from Germany staying with us for a while to form a alliance with the vampires in Germany. I always thought of vampires as some sort of mafia more than royalty. I half expected the Al Pacino to walk in at any moment (If you've never seen The Godfather then you wouldnt understand). WE all took a sip of our glasses and the servants came rushing back out to fill them again.

I escaped from the loud talking and went up to my room. I stood on the balcony and looked up at the glowering moon. I had the odd sensation I was being watched.
I stood over the girls seemingly lifeless form. Wondering what I should do I began to pace. I couldn’t just leave the girl lying in an alley alone. Soon she would be like me, a vampire. She would need help.

Becoming a vampire was not as easy as it should be. At first things seemed fine but adapting to the lifestyle and the eating habits…were difficult to settle with. The part I missed most of all was the sun. I missed its warm rays and light.

It would not be easy for this girl. I heard footsteps reaching closer but I could not leave her so helpless. I stood beside her until the person was close and saw the girl.

“Ebony!” He said reaching her.

Ebony began to move, she was waking and experiencing the differences quickly. She stood up looking at her brother then back at me. She pointed and stood in front of her brother.

“Don’t hurt him. Leave him alone. You’ve had enough.” Ebony said.

“Noble. I wasn’t going to touch him.” I said.

“Whats going on?” He asked.

"Go on explain it. I'm sure he'll except what you are." I said rolling my eyes though secretly I was jealous.
I was really drowsy. "Ebony...what is she talking about!" He said calmly.

"I'm...I'm..a.." I said, still trying to keep myself awake.

"A what?" He asked, sounding more urgent.

"A vampire."
I looked down into our garden which was fenced off by an iron gate. I could have sworn I saw shadows moving around in there.

I suddendly heard loud shouts in an alley not to far from my house. I jumped off the balcony and slid through the iron bars. A breeze rushed by ruffling by dress's hem around. I turned down the alley and saw two vampires and a male.

"A VAMPIRE!" The male yelled.

"Brad calm down.." The girl said in a quiet voice.

"I will not calm down! This ....thing has turned you into a vampire!" he said motiong to the other girl who was standing there cooly.
"Well if I go, and this other blood sucking 'monster' then she'll have trouble doing it on her own. Shes never feed before." I said solemnly.

"Dont get near her!" He said.

"What are you going to do? Let her die over and over again from the pain? Trust me I know, it doesnt work that way." I said.

"Shes right you cant leave her to be painfully hungered." said the other vampire that I recognized to be Kennedy.

"What do you suggest I do?" Brad asked.

"I suggest you go to the hospital and steal some blood from the donors. That should hold her off for a few days maybe even a week.

"You stay away from us!" He said. "I'll do this but trust me when Ebony is ok I'll have my revenge."

"Stop, you're scaring me human." I said sarcastically in a toneless voice.
Ebony

I was shaking and freezing. I wanted to cry...what would I do if had to do this to someone else. I..would never see daylight again.

Why live in a world so cold....I was in such pain I couldn't even think. I could barely hear anything, it sounded like I was in a canyon far away from anything.

This pain was awful, but it was nothing compared to the way I felt inside.
(*SCREAMS IN PAIN* I just wrote an incredibly long additon and it got deleted)

I watched Ebony scream and wriggle on the floor. I then looked at Ann her face was pale and emotionless. I had always wondered how she got so pale. Anyways what to give Ebony to hold her over for a while?

I looked around and a drunk old man came out of the door behind us. I quickly went over there grabbed him and threw him towards Ebony. She didnt move. I ripped at his throat. A splash of blood touched her lips and in seconds she was on top of the man drinking his life away.

She then passed out.

"Someone needs to take her home." I said.

"I will." Brad said.

"No you wont." I answered quickly.

"Why not?" he growled.

"Because she going in a temperary insanity for the next 48 hours. And if she wakes up in the middle of the night hungry she'll kill you-" I started.

"All though not a bad thing." Ann interupted.

"Bad for her because after its over she'll become depressed and klll herself." I said.

"So do you want to take her or shall I?" Ann said looking up at me.

"I'm Not letting YOU take my sister!" Brad screamed at Ann.

"Your the one that made her like this!" He continued.

"Well its not your coice who gets to take her." Ann snapped.

"Then whos is it?" he growled at her.

"Ours." I said motioning to Ann and I.

"Well hurry up then." he said thrwoing his hands up in the air.

"calm down I won teat you or turn you into a vampire." I said to Brad who was struggling.

I set Brad down on the balcony of my bedroom. He followed me through my bedroom to on of my guest bedrooms. It wasn’t at all like what you would expect from a vampire. I opened the door.

“You can stay here until Kennedy is finished helping your sister. Its closer and its up to you.” I said.

“Why should I trust a vampire? A murderer?” He asked angrily.

I flinched and ignored the question. I shook my head after he was silent for awhile waiting for my answer.

“You don’t have to trust you but I promise you no harm will come to you or your sister? Satisfied?” I asked irritated.

He nodded and looked around the room before turning back to me.

“So is everything we hear about vampires true?” He asked.

“We can fly, yes. We cant turn into bats. We can be killed through beheading and a stake through the heart. We cant see the daylight.” I said sadly.

“Oh.” He stopped.

An interesting human.
I sat there feeling drowsy. I wasn't hungry any more..but I felt terrible anyway.

I tried to take my mind off of things, but nothing really seemed to be working.

"Are you alive in there?" Asked Kennedey.
Kennedy

I had flown Ebony back to my place and left her on the black couch in my room. I went downstairs to tell my parents that I had a young vampire and she was going to be staying with us for a while. They nodded and said that it was nice having more vampires in the brotherhood.

When Ebony woke up I decided to show her around.

"This can be your room." I said opening the door across the hall from mine. I walked in and turned on the lights.

"You have a balcony overlooking the forest. WE own 85% of that forest. Your bathrooms in through there." I said pointing to a door. Ebony just looked around the room in awe, and not really saying anything.

"There are 4 levels to this house. A basement which is were we keep any wine, food or blood. A main floor which has the meeting room, study and dining room." I said showing her the main floor.

"Meeting room?" she asked as I showed her the large room.

"Politics and business." I answered.
I pointed up the stairs as I headed for the door.

"Upstairs we have 2 libraries, guestrooms, and studys. ANd a party room." I said opening the door. SHe walked out and looked around the moonlight garden.

"In the front we have miniture ponds and gardens. We have lots of places were anyone could sit and think for a long time and not be disturbed. And we have a lot of trees. So occasionaly we can go outside but we only do that maybe once a month." I said showing her the outside.

"Its lovely." She said sitting on a rock and putting her feet in a small pond.

"Yeah it is. This is my favorite place to live." I said also putting my feet in the pond.

She shivered and said "Do you ever get the feeling someone is watching you?"

"I never use to but Ive had that feeling all night." I said looking at her

"Wierd." she muttered looking at the pond.

"Yeah." I said softly looking into the shadows.
"Its the only way." I explained. "But of course thats probably not your best option is it."

"Besides," I continued. "I wouldnt do that to you."

"What?" He asked amazed.

"I'm not evil alright." I said trying to put one of my most emotional subjects lightly. "I dont kill people for fun....I just...I'm not going to kill myself or anything...so I have to eat..."

He was silent.

"You still cant just kill people..." He said.

"I havent...except once...a very long time ago. Now I just turn them. I know its selfish I just cant do it alright." I said throwing my hands in the air to seem less helpless.

"Still..." He stopped.

"What? Are you going to turn vampire hunter on us or something. What about your sister? She's a vampire to. I wouldnt consider that an option either." I said.

"No...I..." He stopped again.
I stared down into the water. Thinking wasn't a very smart thing for me to do right now. I sighed for what must've been the fifty thousandth time when I heard someone.

"I don't know how much more of my sister arguing with that human I can tolerate, Kennedey." Sighed a male voice.

"Hello Kyle." Kennedey said back. He looked around and past me. His eyes darted back to me after a second.

"Who's this?" He asked.

"Ebony." I said.
Kennedy

"This is Kyle, Ann's older brother." I said.

"And this is Ebony another one of Ann's turnees." I said motioning to Ebony.

"Ah, another one of Anns feedings" Kyle smiled.

A far off voice yelled 'Kennedy'.

"Thats my exit cue" I said poiting inside.

"Are you going to be ok out here?" IO asked Ebony. She nodded. I walked back to the house and entered the big meeting room, where everyone was seated.
I gave up trying to make him understand. There was no way he was going to get it. His sister was one of us and he could not change that either. I'm sure he was shocked, maybe thats why he was so dazed. Yet still I had the strangest feeling around him. It was hard to explain. It was like I wanted to make him like me. I wanted to make him a vampire and it took every power of will I had not to.

I knocked on the door of Ebony's bedroom. I heard voices so I opened the door Kyle and Ebony were talking lightly, he seemed pleased. I smiled. This was my brother, I knew when he liked someone. I could tell he liked the choice I made when turning her vampire.

"Hey." I sighed.

"How is Brad?" Ebony asked and Kyle's face looked sad.

"Your brother," I said to make Kyle perk up, "will not listen to me. Nor any other vampire I'm sure. He doesnt like me very much."

"Do you need any help?" Kyle asked eagerly.

"No." I said shaking my head, " I dont want to drag you into this. I have a feeling things wont turn out like we hope."

"He'll be alright. I'd only be afraid if he wanted revenge or something." Ebony said. "He's very nice."

"Lets go. I just need to teach you a few things so you are better off and then your free to do whatever you wish." I said.

"Even stay here?" She asked.

I nodded and flew out the window. Ebony got a shakey start but followed soon after. We stopped next to a bar. The perfect place to catch those unaware.

"Will your brother allow you to go to a bar?" I asked sarcastically.
"My brother has no say in my life...he is really overprotective though." I sighed.

Ann kind of chuckled. "Really? I didn't notice." She said sarcastically. "Why aren't you so depressed any more?"

"Hey, what's done is done. There is no going back now. I probably would've done the same thing. Hey...I never have to worry about getting a sunburn ever again!" I said smiling internally. This wouldn't be so bad. That Kyle person had gotten me out of my bad mood somehow.

(umm...dont you kill werewolves with silver bullets???? I thought vampires were wooden stakes..)
Kennedy

I went up to my room after my talk with my father. The dors to my balcony were open and thecurtains biloowed with the wind. I began to undo my dress when again I got the sensation I was being watched. Cautiously I walked to the balcony doors and closed them. The thing that made it eerie was that I couldnt see anyone and I couldnt smell anyone but I had the feeling that they were there. Snapping out of my thoughtds I changed into dark blue jeans and a black tank top. I decided to go check on Ebony.

As I neared her door I realized she wasnt there. I did pick up Ann's scent and flew off into the night to find them.
"My cologne?" Dran asked. "you mean the stuff I put on two weeks ago for a date?"

I winked at him then looked out the window. The sun would be rising soon much to my displeasure.

Sun's coming up," I said. "You'd better go."

"Why? Cant I wait for night here?" He asked.

"I dont trust you very much but it doesnt matter to me. Pick an empty room and wait or go out." I said with a half smile. Brad glared but complied and left to find a room.

I sighed looking out my bedroom window. The sun was not visible yet but I could see the colors it began to cast upon the clouds. I wished I could see another sunset or sunrise. The sun was always so bright and warm not dark and cold.

Slowly and sadly I closed the window and pulled the curtains. I closed my door tightly and sat on the edge of my bed until I could see the light outlining the curtains. I laid back and slept. Dreaming of many things that had happened.

I sighed and looked at the curtains. "You'll learn to live without it.." Kyle smiled from behind me.

"Live without what?" I sighed.

"The sun." He stated.

"I prefer the moon...its not so hot and bright and junk..its prettier too..but I will miss feeling warm..." I sighed, looking down.

"You don't have to be cold all the time.." He smiled. I could feel that he was standing close to me. I turned around and looked up at him.

"Kyle?" Kennedey's voice rang out.
'where is that boy?' Kennedy thought as she walked through the halls. She walked right by an open door and saw him in there with Ebony. Kennedy walked backwards

"There you are." Kennedy said practically dragging Kyle out of the room so Ebony could get some sleep. She would be mighty tired for a while.

"Leave her alone. We have over 15 bedrooms in this house. Find one. Stay in it. Or leave." Kennedy said slowly in a mocking way. Kennedy pushed Kyle into a bedroom. She then turned around and closed the door. She began to walk down the hallway and found it eeriely quiet. Kennedy stopped and listened. There wasn't a sound. That was odd. Suddenly Kennedy smealt something but it was to late. She was thrust up into the wall. A hand was at her neck, the other hand held a wooden stake poised at her chest.'This could be a problem'Kennedy thought.
NAME: Kyle.

AGE: 20

PERSONALITY: Looks very peacfull. Likes to freak people in funeral homes out by laying in an open casket and then saying boo before killing them. Loves his sister. likes to play with crosses. likes to pour Holy water on himself. Sarcastic and a big flert. Has a thing for pain and suffering. Fun loving. Semi suicidal. Like to drink from the limbs of a woman rather than the neck all the time. Has turned very few people.

APPEARANCE: Unusualy pale even for a vampire. Deep blue eyes. scruffy black hair with a streak of white. Loose black trousers with a silk shirt. Pulls off the dark brooding tortured soul act very well.

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"Okay Looks like I'm in a different room t'night "he said seeing Brad in his bed.

He opened the door and left. He found kennedy being pinned by somebody and he walked up behind the person pinning her and grabbed his throat. Lifting him up he pinned him to the opposite wall and bit his neck. Just a taste test. Dropping the guy he walked off. He found himself outside ebony's room again. He opened the door alittle and saw her asleep on the bed. Sitting down in the chair he saw a bean of light coming through the small hole in the curtain. He put his hand into the beam and watched the skin blister and burn. He was enjoying the sensation of it. He was used to the pain of the sun. He spent little of his time sleeping and feeding. He learned to harness he strengths and master his weaknesses.

"Is somebody there "asked Ebony grogly?

"forgive me I couldn't help but watch you "he said turning his hand over to burn the other side.

"What are you doing? is something burning? "she said looking over at him.

"Just me "he said with a relaxed expression.
I rose from the bed I was laying on and stretched slightly. I yawned and headed out of the room from habit. I automatically turned toward Brad's room. I shook myself but decided to go in anyway.

He was laying on his bed, shirtless, his eyes shut tight but moving under the lids. I smiled a little, he was dreaming or something like that. I stood over him then after about ten minutes he spoke, his eyes still closed.

"What are you doing in here?" He asked calmly.

"I just got hungry and you were my first choice. No really, I came to wake you. Its night already." I said.

He sat up and scanned the room, "I've been up the whole ten minutes you've been in here."

"Did you get much sleep?" I asked stunned I was actually concerned.

"Doesnt matter." He stood and picked up his shirt from the ground.
Ebony smiled sleepily. "I don't see what's so great about watching me."

He smiled and took his hand out of the light. He leaned down so he was close to her face. "You're beautiful.." He said charmingly.

"Uh huh....what are you smoking.." She asked with arched eybrows.

"Well..it was my hand." He said.

"Verrry funny." Ebony said, closing her eyes quietly.

"I thought so." He chuckled. She felt him touch her face and smiled a bit.
(Who else did you invite Angelwriter?)

Kennedy wasn't sure what at the moment she should do. Here she was in her own house and she had a stake poised at her chest and a hand at her throat. Kennedy wondered what they could want.

'Were they just another group of liberal vampire slayers trying to bring down thier race?'

OR
'Were they other vampires that were after something?'

Kennedy could feel the grip tighten around her neck. Not that it bothered her much. She was dead. It was more uncomfortable if anything.

"Put me down." Kennedy said calmly.
"So... how's death been treating you "he asked her moving his hand?

"well...It's not that different from being alive "she said

"apart from the drinking blood, not needing to breath...and then there's the sun. going all crispy is never a good thing. Plus lack of a heart beat...that thump thump would drive me crazy "he said sitting down in the chair.

"But you must have had one... "she said looking confused.

"Ah hell no. I never had one in my entire unlife. I was born a vampire so naturaly no pulse "he said with a little smirk.

"You're very relaxed with being a vampire. I mean technicly...we're just dead people walking around "she said sitting down on the corner of the bed.

"Hey being young and gorgeous for all eternity is one of the perks of being all vamped up "he said running his hand through his hair.
I smirked at his confusion. It was very cute. I held my hands in the air like a criminal.

"No biting. I swear." I said.

"Well...my sister..." He began.

"Has got someone to take care of her at the moment." I smiled at the thought.

"I...guess." He said still confused and surprised.

"lets go then!" I said cheerily.

(Sorry very busy! Thanksgiving and all!)
Ebony smiled and shrugged her shoulders. I guess never having to spend your life savings on wrinkle medicine is going to be nice. She smiled and snuggled into her bed a little more. She was really comfortable for some reason.

"You need to get some sleep." She heard him say.

"O.k.." She said drowsily, falling asleep.
He waited alittle while before heading out of her room. He was hungry so he stepped up out of a near by window. He dropped out of it and landed on the pavement bearly bending his knee's. As soon as his feet touched the ground he took a step foreward. He headed into town and saught out a straggler. He found a girl walking down and allyway and smiled to himself. He jumped up and over her and bounced off the wall to land out of sight. Unluckly he walked into a trash can making alot of noise.

"Damm it...fricken thing "he growled stepping out from the corner.

"hey are you all right? "asked the girl?

"Huh Oh sorry...I didn't see you "he said grabbing her and sinking his teeth into her neck.

He drained her and dropped her. He smiled and licked his lips. He walked back to the mansion and sat back down in the lounge. He felt like playing something so he went over to the piano. he began to play a soft melody and was humming along with himself.
"So can you see yourself in mirrors and stuff?" Brad asked.

"Not everything you hear is true about vampires. Like most cant fly or turn into bats. Only the oldest can change their form. We can be seen in mirrors. I dont know where that came from. Garlic just makes us terribly sick...which can lead to death because most cant hunt after eating garlic." I smiled.

"Does anyone know about vampires?" Brad asked walking around a puddle.

"Yes, actually there is a group that hunts down vampires and kills them. They are very skilled and experience training as many as they can. They're always bothering us. They managed to get a friend of mine last month." I said.

"I'm sorry...I guess." He was confused obviously, wondering why the death of a vampire was a bad thing.

"I'm not. She hated being a vampire." I shrugged.
Ebony sighed and curled up into her blanket. She couldn't seem to sleep for being so cold. A small tear formed in the corner of her eye. "I'm so cold..." She sniffled out, burying her face into her pillow and starting to sob. She heard her door creak open and felt someone sit down beside her. Whoever it was tenatively reached down and stroked her hair. She looked up to see Kyle give her a half smile. He looked upwards for a minute before pulling her close to him. She felt like she was warming up actually. "Kyle??" She questioned.

He didn't say anything, but just held her quietly against him.
"Do you want me to get you some extra blankets? Maybe turn up the heating? "he asked as he let go of her?

She smiled and nodded. He went over to a closet and pulled out a soft looking blanket with a cord attached. Plugging it in he tucked it under the bigger quilt. He then fumbled with a knob on the base of the radiator and checked to feel it warming up. He came back over and sat down on the bed with her. Put his arm around her and rubbed her back.

"Down side to being an undead immortal...heating bills.....they a quite literaly to die for "he joked.

She laughed and he laughed. He stood up heading for the door.

"If you want me just whistle....you can whistle can't you? "he said as he opened the door.

"Kyle wait...Please stay....I don't want to be alone right now "she said looking at him.

He smiled and went back over to her. He sat back down next to her and layed down feeling the warmth of the electric blanket.

"You know....I don't usualy do this sort of thing. But sinse you asked me to stay...I guese it's okay "he smiled as she layed back down.

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