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Rated: E · Poetry · Health · #2301564
Trying to, no I wiil quit.
Smoking

Smoking
Cloaking
clean lungs in grey
Taking
Snaking
Your life away



Brevee Poetry Fom
syllabic, L1 L2 L4 L5 are 2 syllables each line and L3 & L6 are 4 syllables each.
Rhyme A-A-B-C-C-B



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