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Rated: GC · Short Story · Action/Adventure · #2263852

Lily is hoping for a smooth evening dinner with her boyfriend, yet it doesn't end well.

A/N - This is a commissioned story for "Malethor." Thanks man for the opportunity to make you a story and I hope the rest of you enjoy this story. This is my first ever vore type story and I hope I can do better in the future.

Malethor's Profile: https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/mesovereign

Warning Tags: [Giantess, Unaware, Shrunken, Digestion, Unwilling, Vore]

Kate could be seen quickly driving home, tearing her fingers into the steering wheel as she floored the car towards home. Kate was stressed out, almost feeling like she wanted to rip out her own long wavy blond hair that was covering her eyes. Kate was wearing nothing more than a pair of black yoga pants and a plain blue short sleeved shirt. Kate looked briefly down at her shirt to notice her flat breasts, feeling slightly disappointed with herself.

All of a sudden Kate looked in front of her and slammed on the brake, before looking at the light turning red and impatiently waiting for it to turn green.

“Why can’t traffic go any faster?” Kate complained as she began rapidly honking her horn, before realizing that it wasn’t anyone’s fault in the traffic line. Just her annoying boss making her act like this. Kate tried to relax, maintaining a comfortable speed all the way towards her house. As soon as Kate watched her car slowly park into place, she quickly locked her house and opened up her door.

Kate slammed the door quickly behind her as she said: “Thank god…” Kate didn’t have the best day in the world and by this point she just wanted to quickly see the end of it. From the time she arrived to after she drove home, one mishap after the other. Kate pushed her back against the wall as she slowly started dragging herself down to the floor before her. Kate quickly sighed as she felt her eyes closing shut. Wanting to take a quick power nap, not before she felt her body collapse onto the ground. Hitting her head against the ground and falling asleep.

Moments to Kate felt like minutes to hours as she dreamed of herself in a better place. Not before long she heard a voice start talking towards her. All Kate could hear was a voice telling her: “Get Up!”, “WAKE UP!” “KATE!” As Kate Slowly opened her eyes, she saw her sister Lily crouching down before Kate told her to wake up.

“L-I-L-LILY?!” Kate quickly sits back up, but unknowingly hits the back of her head against the door right behind her. Kate starts grunting from the pain, as she uses her hands to grip the back of her head.

Lily was Kate’s sister who has been living with her for almost all of her life, after their parents gave the sister’s their house in aim to move into a smaller apartment. Lily had long hair unlike Kate who had rather short hair, usually sported a tank top as she felt like most of her shirts weren’t too interesting to wear. Lily herself had a large breast which made a lot of men try to stare down or directly at her chest as they were really noticeable. Most of the time she even tries and fails to cover them up. She was really thin compared to most other women, making her almost irresistible to other men who looked at her for more than a second. Lily had long silk black hair, with bright blue eyes that seemed like more or less like crystals.

“Kate, You…Okay?” Lily asked slightly confused about her sister sleeping on the ground before her and also her minor head injury.

“Y-yeah…I’m fine.” Kate extends her head out to Lily before continuing. “Could you help me get up?”

Lily let out a slight chuckle as she extended her hand over to Kate’s. “Sure, Sis.” Lily tries standing up while using a lot of her strength to lift Kate off of the ground. Once Kate was standing on her own two feet, Lily stumbled back into the stairs as she looked at how tall her sister was.

“I swear you always get taller every time I see you.” Lily complimented as she forced herself up and looked up toward her sister Kate. Kate smiled as she responded back towards Lily.

“I never asked to be born taller than most.”

“I mean you stand 5 foot 7. All I stand is 5-foot 3…it makes me feel embarrassed.” Lily felt her cheeks glowing bright red. So, Lily turned her head away from Kate to try and hide her embarrassment.

Kate was able to see from Lily’s fragile attempt to hide her inner embracement. Kate smiled as she continued the conversation: “I thought you like short guys…like that guy…*snaps her fingers* what was his name…”

“Bryan…”

*Snaps Fingers* “Bryan. How could I forget, sorry I just have a lot on my mind today.” Kate did her best to apologize towards Lily.

“I just…want you to act…normal. When he is here.” Lily tried to hide her voice under her breath to not try and upset her sister.

Lily was personally planning to hear her sister start yelling at her.

“I mean, am I not normal?” Kate was slightly confused, questioning her younger sister.

“No. It isn’t that- it’s the fact that you don’t like tiny people.”

“WHAT?! I don’t care if he is 1 foot, 6 inches or 1 inch tall off the ground. As long as you think he is great, then I think he is great.”

“Well, I know your boss is the same as Bryan, so I thought you hate everyone tiny.”

“Yeah, but my boss is just a total ass, ordering us around to work faster when she doesn’t even know what it is like. That infuriates me. Yet if it makes you feel comfortable, then I will be on my best behavior.”

“Thanks, Kate.” Lily felt herself sigh as it felt like a massive burden was thrown off of her shoulders. As all Lily needed to care about was tonight.

The Unpredictable Evening


2 Hours Later…


“I hope he is coming…this is really bad.” Lily started pacing rapidly back and forth against the creaky floor beneath her.

“I am just saying, you got to calm dow-“

“I CAN’T CALM DOWN; THIS IS THE MOST IMPORTANT EVENT OF MY LIFE!” Lily interrupted Kate, shouting towards her as she tried to calm herself down. Looking intently at the clock as if her life depended on it, watching the clock slowly tick second by second.

“I just want this dinner to work. I want to get to at least a 2nd base relationship with one decent guy.” Lily slouches back against a chair infront of her, before slouching her arms across the kitchen table.

“2nd base? I think you are thinking too much about this.”

“Why do you say that how many guys have you gone out with?...And are currently dating?” Lily tried one upping her sister, to try and reinforce the point that she didn’t understand what she was going through.

“Well no one rig-“

“SEE! So that is why this needs to be perfect!” Lily shouted back at Kate who was standing there slumping her arms across her chest. Kate even added an eye roll as she went into the kitchen to check on the food.

Lily & Bryan were in a relationship for less than a year, however, today will mark their one-year anniversary. So, Lily asked Bryan to come over to her house so they could have dinner for not just them but also to get a chance to meet Kate. Lily really wants to make the relationship last and tries relying on herself to make sure the relationship can last. Lily wants this night to go smoothly and start patiently watching the time slowly tick by. Getting everything ready 30 minutes in advance, while the food waits to cook.

Kate mostly was the cook of the evening and whipped up a Red Lobster with a side course of shrimp with a little container of marinara sauce. Not only that but to finish up the meal, if everyone isn’t full she baked a chicken pot pie which Kate dazzles with a bunch of whipped cream and cherries on top. As Kate presents it upon the table, Kate realizes this may be a bit too much for her, Lily & Most Likely Bryan.
As soon as Kate started getting the food out of the kitchen, Kate looked over at Lily who was texting into her bright blue screen in front of her with glee. Kate smirked seeing Lily rapidly texting, seeing the messages come in and out rapidly. As soon as Kate looked over at Lily, the doorbell to their place started ringing.

Lily jumped up in glee and said: “He’s here!”

Kate rolled her eyes as she watched Lily open the door, looking down towards her feet to see her best friend ringing a 2nd little doorbell by their steps. As Kate looked down at Bryan, he was really tiny standing no taller than a penny. If Kate wasn’t careful, she may accidentally squish him. Bryan dressed up in a cute little black tuxedo, it wasn’t a formal event, but Lily could feel happy that Bryan set up to at least dress fancy. The suit itself was a black tuxedo, the suit was slightly wrinkled, and you could tell he didn’t know how to tie a tie but to Lily it was the thought that counted. Bryan was a fairly handsome fellow however with disheveled hair it looked like he quickly got into a suit at the last minute. Lily looked over at Kate and said: “Can you help our guest in?”

“Uhhhh, okay?” Kate bent her body down on her knees as she cupped both of her hands together, leaning her body slowly closer to Bryan.

“WAIT!” Lily yelled toward her sister.

“What?” Kate turned around quickly looking back at her sister in disbelief.

“Ask Bryan what he would prefer.” Lily felt so worried that Kate was screwing up their chances at having a successful dinner, she felt like it would offend him. Yet not realizing that she was pissing off her sister for babying her so much.

Kate bends back before hearing Bryan reply back towards her: “I am fine with whatever you feel comfortable with.”

Kate bends back down waiting for Bryan to crawl up her fingers and lay patiently in her hands, as she lifts her hands slowly up, to not overwhelm Bryan. Lily trying to jump in to critique her sister but doesn’t say a word in case of Bryan falling down to the floor. Lily just went behind her sister and slowly closed the door behind her as Kate looked down at Bryan.

“Where do you want me to set you down?”

To Bryan it felt really odd, to stare up to hold a conversation at a woman’s face just to tell him where to go. However, Bryan did his best to ignore or be rude and said: “Set me down wherever you feel comfortable."

Kate lowered her hands near the coffee table, which was right next to her couch, watching and feeling Bryan slowly get off her hands. Kate pulls her hands back as Lily breaths a sigh of relief, seeing Bryan safely on the kitchen table. Before Lily quickly looks down at her outfit realizing what she is wearing…

“Uhhhh…” Lily was contemplating out loud before looking over to Kate and saying: “Take care of Bryan until I get back!” Before rushing up towards her room to change into some better clothes.

Kate smirks as she hears her sister’s heavy footsteps creek the floorboards on the step, slightly squeaking loudly as Lily pounded down on each step. Kate makes a little joke underneath her breath.

“She is gaining a bit of weight.” As soon as Kate finished speaking, she turned around hearing Bryan chuckling at her joke. Kate instantly felt embarrassed and said: “OH. Please don’t tell her, I don’t want to deal with a headache later on.”

Bryan chuckled before saying: “Don’t worry I won’t say a word.” Kate breathed a sigh of relief as she asked Bryan a question.

“Need anything like food? Water?”

“Ah, nah I think I am all good.” Bryan responded.

“Alright.” Kate walks over to the kitchen and grabs a cup of yogurt with a spoon and walks back to the couch, seeing Bryan and asking.

“You don’t mind if I eat this, right?”

“No, I don't have a problem.”

“Alright. Well, I still wanted to make sure.” Kate responded back before slowly sitting down on the couch and placing her yogurt on top of the coffee table in front of her. As she started asking Bryan a few questions, to get to know him.

“So, Lily doesn’t tell me much about you. So what do you do for a job?”

“Job? I haven’t been able to land one yet, however I hear management positions are becoming more open.” Kate chuckled however it just made her think of her boss forcing her to work faster and better. Kate tried to get the image out of her mind and continued to ask him more questions.

“Ummmm, what do you like to do for hobbies?”

“I like dating Lily but pretty much, I don’t have much going on with my life.” Kate was Kinda shocked to hear that, she tried hiding her expression by covering her mouth with her hand. Yet to Kate it sounded more or less like the guy is a slightly crazy person.

“Uh, how did you two meet?”

“Well, me & Lily met at a bar and…I am not sure what happened afterward. All I remember was she just gave her phone number shortly afterward.” Kate basically confirmed her initial skepticism, he is just an almost mindless man who acts in the moment instead of acting naturally all the time. Kate felt like their relationship wasn’t going to last too long at this pace unless she could say something. Yet Kate was at an impasse if she said anything, Bryan or Lily could get mad at her but if she does nothing her sister will be disappointed in the future.

Kate thought maybe she could eat her problems away and she slowly ripped the cap off of the yogurt, Kate smelt something rotten. It smelt really fowl, quickly Kate began sniffing around and even asked Bryan if he smelt anything.

“Uh Bryan, do you smell something Burning?”

“Yeah, I think your oven is also on fire.” Kate quickly looks over at the kitchen, forgetting to turn her oven off after she had some of her muffins inside. Kate quickly reacts by slamming her shin against the side of the coffee table, knocking the yogurt onto the coffee table, and making Bryan trip into the yogurt before him.

“Ah….shit...SHIT....SHIT” Kate didn’t have enough time to react to both things at the same time, she quickly rubbed her shin and ran to help stop her currently burnt muffins from catching fire. Kate could be seen grabbing a fire extinguisher and quickly overloading her oven with enough fire extinguisher before she quickly slumped back into her wooden dining chair.

“Jeez, I hope I didn’t make you worry, Bryan. Bryan?” As Kate looked around, she wasn’t able to see Bryan anywhere, but she did see the yogurt mess on the coffee table. “Well, I better clean this up, in the meantime.” Kate scooped up as much Yogurt as she could from the table, even Bryan in the process yet he blended in with the yogurt it was hard for her to see. Before Kate lowered her head down in slight embarrassment biting down slightly on the spoon.
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Bryan narrowly avoided Kate’s gigantic teeth that felt like it slammed down before him, Bryan was slightly lifted up and saw two giant lips before him but didn’t know what was happening until the last minute. Kate opened up her mouth and soon Bryan was cast into Kate’s mouth being bombarded by Kate’s tongue which had him hopelessly flail from side to side, throwing his body around like it was a ragdoll. No matter how much Bryan tried to recover he was quickly thrown back to the floor or walls. It was his own personal hell that he couldn’t escape from.
The air felt tight around him as the heat began overwhelming his choices making it feel like he was going to collapse. The overall heat actually felt like it was a sauna and being pinned towards each wall of her mouth, Bryan felt Kate’s saliva start slowly wrapping across his entire body. It made him feel even more weaker than he was in. Yet it was only getting started as Kate savored the taste of yogurt in her mouth plastering Bryan with loads of Yogurt. It was a never-ending cycle for him of being licked fully clean before being covered in more yogurt repeating the cycle. Time itself felt to increase when in reality it was much slower than Bryan could think of.
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Kate was actually savoring the taste, she could barely feel Bryan, but she could taste him. Kate didn’t know Bryan was in her mouth but for some reason her yogurt tasted really rich as if someone spiked it a bit. Tasting almost like chocolate and vanilla mix that Kate seemed to love. Before she could savor the taste any longer, she heard Lily start yelling: “AHHHHHHHHHHHH”

Kate thought her sister may be in trouble and tried quickly swallowing the yogurt. Yet something felt stuck inside her esophagus, in less than a second Kate quickly gripped the side of her couch as she felt like she was choking. Unable to help her sister as she tried coughing up whatever was inside her throat.
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For Bryan’s situation it got worse since he was now stuck in-between Kate’s esophagus, trying to propel himself up by placing his feet and arms across the side of her esophagus to try and desperately hang on. Bryan was unable to see anything around him as it was completely pitch black, all Bryan could do was go off what he felt in front of him. Yet Bryan didn’t account for the slick slippery walls slowly making him descend further towards his doom and also didn’t plan for the strain it was posing on Kate. As with each cough, Kate was making Bryan lose his ability to balance himself and he felt himself start to slowly slip before he felt his feet slip and he was dragged down into Kate’s stomach.

Feeling the walls tightly convulse around him and feeling the absolute panic, he couldn’t do anything as it felt like it was crushing his body.
In a moment of desperation Bryan tried to call for Kate’s name hoping that he could hear him before he went down towards her stomach. Bryan’s voice echoing off of her mouth and coming out of Kate’s mouth. However, Kate wasn’t focusing on Bryan’s voice, nor could she hear it as she was too busy trying to dislodge her throat.
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Kate was able to finally breathe and stopped for a moment to catch her breath before responding towards her sister: “Are you okay?”

“GET IN HERE NOW!”

“Alright.” In a rush Kate rushed up the stairs to help her sister, Kate didn’t know what she may expect but she hoped that she could handle it.

Kate slams Lily’s door open shouting her sister’s name trying to help her out: “YOU OKAY?!” As soon as Kate saw Lily up on a chair hiding from a spider crawling around the floor, she imminently was disappointed. A stern look went across her face as she looked at Lily’s face.

“I need help, it is too creepy for me.” Lily responded. Kate reacted by slapping her hand across her face, before walking slowly over towards the spider and slamming her high heel down upon the spider.

“Happy now?”

“Yeah…” Lily wiped off her worried face before thinking back about Bryan asking her sister: “Do you think Bryan would freak out the same way as I did?”

Kate thought about it for a second and concluded: “No.”

Lily felt slightly embarrassed and looked at herself in the mirror to look at how she looked. Lily was wearing a thin short sleeved black shirt with an adorable snowman right in the middle of her shirt. While also sporting very tight blue jeans around her waist, which were slightly dragging into her skin, but it was worth it for peak perfection to her. Lily looked over at Kate to ask if she looked presentable. Kate knew that it was fine with whatever she wore, this is a casual event, but it helps build up their relationship. Even though Kate didn’t know she ate Lily’s boyfriend, she still supported Lily in her decision.

“Yeah, you look fine, come on, let's go downstairs.” Kate responded, grabbing Lily’s arm as they proceeded to walk down the steps before them. As soon as Kate and Lily got downstairs they looked around for Bryan to show off what Lily was hearing, yet the more they kept searching around the room they found no one.

“Where did he go? Did you do something to him?” Lily accuses her sister before her sister raises her hands up in total surprise, unaware of the situation she indirectly caused.

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“OWWWW…” Bryan complained as he could barely see anything, but he could still feel the intense heat overwhelming his decisions to think clearly. As Bryan tried to pick himself back up, his hand felt the floor before him and it felt sticky and moist, it was weird to him. Bryan reached into his pocket and found he still had his phone on him “OH THANK GOD.” He repeated as he headed over to his contacts and selected Lily immediately.

Bryan heard the ringing start going through and all Bryan could hope in that moment was that Lily could pick up. Bryan even started saying pick up out loud rapidly. “Pick Up, Pick Up, PICK UP!....” Bryan was getting more desperate as he began to panic about his situation.

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Lily then starts to feel her phone ring from her pocket, she looks at the number and it was: “Bryan?” Lily pulled her surprise back a bit but answered it reluctantly.

“Hello?” Lily answers before Bryan starts overwhelming Lily’s brain by trying to explain his situation towards her super-fast. Bryan tried talking really fast as he didn’t think he would get another chance to say it, yet not realizing that his connection was fluctuating rapidly. Going in and out constantly, where he sounded like a computer with a robotic response. “Bryan. Bryan, try to explain where you are a bit more clearly. You are starting to cut out.” Before Bryan could explain it any further, he felt something burning by his foot. He quickly pulled back his foot but let go of his phone watching it slowly melt before him.

His only way to contact the outside was lost as a large pool of yellow water could be heard boiling in front of him, glowing bright yellow, bouncing the light to help illuminate where he was. Constantly fluctuating back and forth, but it looked like he was in a nearly dark cavern with pink flesh soaking across the walls. The walls all of a sudden started pulsating and quivering with an almost ear piercing groan invading Bryan’s eardrums. It was slightly hard to focus for Bryan but after a bit of thinking he figured out where he was. Kate’s stomach and the pool of yellow water was stomach acid, if he didn’t get out, he would get digested.

Bryan looked down at his show seeing the acid already tear through the bottom of it. “FUCK” Bryan yelled before taking off his shoe and throwing it into the stomach acid. Bryan was trying his best to adapt to the surroundings watching the stomach acid taking less than 5 seconds to completely dissolve his shoe instantly. Thankfully Bryan was somehow narrowly avoiding death, but the stomach acid was getting closer and closer towards him. It was only a matter of time until he would need to think of a plan.

All of a sudden, Bryan was trying to walk back slowly but tripped on his other shoe, leaving his foot to touch the stomach acid. Bryan immediately pulled his foot back as it felt like it was burning before him, gripping his foot from the amount of pain, with the pain being so unbearable he was screaming and shouting at nothing. “FUCK…ah…god..damn…mother…AHH” Looking down at his foot it was fine however it looked seriously burnt, the death that awaited Bryan was going to be very slow and painful.

Yet it didn’t seem to be over as yogurt splashed into the giant pool of stomach acids, sending stomach acid flying in all directions. Upon contact it looked like a splash at a water fountain however as it seemed cool and pretty at first. It started coming closer to Bryan. Bryan tried holding his arm up to try and defend against it. Yet it globed across his arm and body making him walk away with severe burns which only made him prolonged the inevitable outcome, he was slowly being locked into.

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Lily tries calling Bryan back, but it seems like he wasn’t picking up anymore. As all Bryan’s phone did was go straight to voicemail every single time, she tried to call him. Lily was getting impatient as Kate just sat down eating yogurt watching Lily desperately try calling him over and over like a broken record.

“He didn’t block me, did he?” Lily is still pointlessly calling and texting him back just to hear the same response: “We are sorry, but this number is no longer in service.” It made Lily’s skin start to crawl and she felt herself start to shed tears across her face.

“Lily, you gotta stop calling him.” Kate knew that something was weird, why would Lily’s boyfriend just vanish all of a sudden. To her it felt like a motive, Bryan was looking for other cute girls while dating her sister and once he found a girl he liked. He ditches them, it seemed like the only reasonable conclusion in her mind. As Kate put down her yogurt and asked Kate to sit on the couch beside her.

“But…why…” Lily cried with a tear shedding down her face as she looked across towards her sister. Lily’s makeup was slowly starting to mess up her pale face as the dark black eyeliner and bright red cheeks. Lily was devastated and saw her sister as her only anchor back towards normal reality.

Kate embraced her sister tightly, trying to help her calm down as she gently patted her on the head telling her: “You're fine, you're strong. This is just how the world works out.” Kate then started looking around the room to try and help Lily focus a bit more. Then looking at the TV she remembered an old dvd she had about yoga. Kate pulled Lily back and started saying to her:

“How about we relax and do some yoga.” Kate is trying to bring her sister’s happy mood up with her smile.

“But…but…but…but…” Lily said, repeating herself as she felt her nose become stuffy.

“Just trust me”

“Okay…” The now defeated Lily joins her sister as they move the coffee table out of the way and start with some breathing exercises.

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Bryan could start to really smell the toxic fumes around him, as it almost made him want to vomit. Before long Bryan was forced into a corner trapped with no way of escape. There was nothing he could do in his final moments except close his eyes and hope for the best as he lowered his foot into the water. Accepting his fate, in a rapid struggle his nerves were completely shot crawling up his entire spine as if his body was quivering in total fear.

Bryan could feel his skin lightening up and burning before him, scaring his entire body from top to bottom. As the acid slowly worked up his body dissolving his clothes effortlessly, tearing through any dignity he had still in him. Soon Bryan’s legs hurt so much he collapsed into the stomach acids before him and felt his entire body light up on fire. Yet it didn’t get better it only got worse as Kate moved her body quickly from side to side imitating the yoga poses she was relaxing with. Sending Bryan to go flying wall to wall in rapid motion.

Bryan tried reaching his hand out, but his body shut down before him. He could barely move his arm as he felt himself going unconscious. Hitting the limit of how much his body could deal with the pain that encapsulated him, Bryan was nothing more than a floating casket by this point being completely unable to do anything to help protect himself.

Bryan was dragged slowly down into the acid that was around him gravitating slowly towards Kate’s sphincter. Bryan was slowly dragged down inch after painful inch as he went into Kate’s sphincter headfirst, pulling him further down, constricting across his entire body as it forced him to go deeper. Crushing a few of Bryan’s fragile bones in the process as he flows slowly down Kate’s intestines.

As his almost lifeless body was dragged through Kate’s intestines, he was mindlessly smacking himself against large portions of food that were able to get through Kate’s Sphincter. As a bunch of tiny tendrils grappled onto Bryan’s body squeezing tightly against his body. The tendrils wrapped around his arms trapping him in place as he was unable to do anything to stop it. The pressure was going to rip his body apart and nothing he could do could stop it as he soon was ripped apart from the world, never to be seen or heard from again.
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Lily felt herself calm down as she mimicked her sister, stretching her body to the left to bend her body down to touch her tiptoes. At first it was hard to stop thinking about Bryan but after a while it became normal to Lily. Before long she started talking again towards her sister.

“I am sorry for making you worry.” Lily said, wiping the tears off of her face as she kept imitating the TV screen before her.

“It’s fine. It happens to everyone.”

“But why him…why…I still don’t understand.”

“Look, all men no matter how they appear, or look, can act like immature people. It just so happens you met one who was a piece of shit.” Kate stopped working out and looked back at her sister.

“Well, you may not have a date, but we do have a feast. How about it?” Kate extends her arm out towards Lily helping her off her feet and the two begin to start eating.

The End

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