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Rated: E · Poetry · Contest Entry · #2200202
A free verse poem for Shadows and Light
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A free verse poem for Shadows and Light
#2200202 by Chris Breva Author IconMail Icon
12 lines

Plants yielding the crop
Farmers working and clearing fields
Apples feeding buzzing bees
Birds migrating to the south
Storms towering, beginning to blow
Barns are filling with crops.

Stores are booming with the food
Bulls are fattening in the corral
Adonis is yawning and going to sleep
Earth is balancing and spinning on
The moon is eyeing the working man
Farmers working the harvest

I have made a transition in my writing. I try to avoid adjectives and adverbs, using primarily nouns, pronouns, and verbs. I find this allows the reader to "interpret"the work. Comments welcome.
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