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Crooked brick spine controls the nerves of the mountain where tourists backpack where warriors once patrolled. Teen, with tousled sun-bleached hair, and Boston College t-shirt, looks skyward rather than down. At a camera? Cameras mounted high patrol now but for what? Perhaps to take pictures of those who feel the need to inscribe their names on wall created two-thousand years ago. Brinna, Max, Darki, Marc and Mona-- Perhaps it is the only way they feel their name will survive. Mu Tian Yu Chang Cheng Park; access road to tunneled bunkers. 40 deg. 25 min,50sec N by 116 deg 33 min 54 sec E.. Mountains, some sporting caps of snow rib out in waves fading off to blend with the sky. Yet near, all is a study in brown: the palette broken on by tourist reds and greens. Down the steps, out of place, a jarring reminder that nothing is sacred anymore, souvenir vendor hawks caps, water, beribboned medals: I hiked the Great Wall of China or some-such. Children peer between the crenellated battlements looking down to see wind-twisted scrub and not invading hoards. Yet now, having humped and hiked across the mountains, the browns give way to verdant greens. Walking sticks help prod and push the weary up yet more of the 3100 stairs. Hunched up backbone spanning ancient country, traversed these days by those foreign to its shores far more than those to whom its history speaks in day to day languages spoken only in the heart. Wanderers all, seekers and searchers, the lost and the found, the road weary and the energized... the last great adventure or only the first? Crooked spined Chinese woman squats down near shaded wall. Small child, easily a grand or great, sleeps in blanket nest while the ancient crone spits saliva on dirtied cloth and cleans another brick. Prompt for: Feb 9 (Fyn)Subject or Theme: On Google Earth/Maps, go to a place in China where you can get down to street view and take us on a walk. Suggest Hong Kong or Taiwan as we know you CAN get to street level in those places.. Be descriptive and tell us what you see. Try to find a street name and use it in your poem. Word(s) to Include: None, but do be extremely descriptive. What is different from where you live and what is the same? (or any derivatives of these words) Forbidden Word(s): NONE but do describe your scene very well!!! (or any derivatives of these words) Additional Parameters: Remember, do not use forbidden words ANYWHERE, including title or the brief description. At least 24 lines. |