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My first draft of the start of my story "The Dark Crystal". Please tell me what you think! |
I continued down the old cobbled road, walking past house after house, in the hopes of seeing anything that might jog my memory on where I was. Lost, I thought, lost in my own home city! I couldn't believe how stupid I had managed to be. I had spent another night getting drunk on cheap ale, and now I was paying the price for it. In my drunken state, I fell over, and when I brought myself back to my feet I could see an inn in front of me. Maybe I could stay here, just for one night. I walked into the building, and there were still a couple of people at the bar. I walked over, and spoke to the barman, "Are you the innkeeper?" I asked him, "Why, yes, I am," he told me, "Do you want to stay the night?" "Yeah," I replied, "How much?" "That'll be three coppers," he stated. I handed over the money, and sat down, "I'll have a pint of ale, too, thanks." The innkeeper poured my pint, and as I began drinking it, the man next to me began speaking to me. "So, you heard about that kidnapping?" he asked, "No," I told him, "I'm not from around here." "Well," he replied, "If you're looking to earn a bit of money, I'm interested in going after it, and i'll need somebody to help me." I thought about the offer for a second. Whilst I didn't want to risk my life going after somebody who was kidnapped, I needed the money to fuel my ale habit. Anyway, I didn't have anything better to do. "Sure I can leave tomorrow afternoon, once I get my stuff." "Brilliant!" he exclaimed, before holding his hand out for me to shake it, "I'm Caleb, by the way. You?" I took his offer of a handshake, before introducing myself, "Keane. It's nice to meet you!" |