link to Goleuni'r Byd Arc 1 to be edited

Below is a link to the first arc of my Goleuni'r Byd series.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0Bx6C8PWLaNVlcUU0cTVMOWhrZHM/view?usp=sharing

Note to reviewers:

To the first to provide a minimal of 4147 words per Part analysis along with feedback for each Part in addition to suggestions on one particular poll shall receive at bare minimum 1000 GP per Part + 500 GP for participating in the poll and + 300 GP for emailing me on why you chose what you picked, besides the reason of it was just there or I had no other better alternative.

The poll is in my portfolio and is labeled "Always the Victim?"

The reward should be delayed to a day at most, unless the review is sent on either Sat, Sunday, or Tues or 5PM on Monday

Texts that have a strikethrough means that I'm considering omitting them

Texts that are shadowed and have each word underline is a mental note to myself.

Please use careful judgment to determine which pieces are part of the Arc and which ones are just a mental exercise





I forgot to mention this earlier, but this arc has an intentional setup.



Warning: Offer may terminate at any time past 3 months or if I have insufficient GP