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Outline

of

Generation Witch

A. Meet Sarah

This chapter’s scenes are about Sarah. It is based on the conflicts that is going on in her family. Most of the chapter happens in the family’s home. There is another scene where she and J.J. is separated.



1. We meet Sarah’s family

X.          Edward becomes a drunk

a.          After losing his job

XI.          Emma hangs herself

b.          She is lonely living in the country

XII.          Lee and Jack once loving brothers are growing up abusing her

c.          They were angry that Sarah found her hung

d.          They blamed their sister.

2. Meet J.J

xvi.          Sarah and J.J get married

A.          J.J. was Lee’s best friend

B.          J.J. had been asked to sleep with their sister by Lee

C.          J.J. fell in love and wanted to help her

D.          J.J. just laid in the bed with her holding her

E.          

xvii.          You meet J.J.’s parents

A. His mother and father were pastors

B. They were black and did not believe in mixing races



xviii.          Both families find out and find them the morning after

A.          The couple were waking up from their wedding night in a hotel room

B.          All three parents and both brothers were at the door



xix.          They are beaten and Sarah agrees not to see her husband

A.          Lee and Jack beat and kick Jack

B.          Jack knocks Sarah across the room when she tried to pull him off her lover

C.          She agrees to never see J.J. again to save his life

xx.          James sends J.J. out of state

A.          Afraid that his son would be killed, James sends J.J. to Europe



WW.          Mistresses Zodiac

First scene is of Sarah being homeless, and she meets Mark. She lives at their house. There she cares for their twin daughters. There is an emotional scene in the children’s bedroom. A later scene is meeting Anna. Last scene of this chapter is finding the coven, and giving birth to a daughter during a ritual.



4.          Sarah is homeless and pregnant

XIX.          She uses local media and library to search for help for her child

A.          She used internet to find government programs or employment and housing

XX.          meets Mark and his wife Carol

A. Mark sees her crying in the library

B. He seemed nice and takes her home to sit for his twins

C. Carol is meek and humble woman

D. Mark was dominating person

XXI.          She becomes a live in babysitter for their twins

XXII.          Mark rapes her in the children’s bedroom

A. Mark and Sarah carry the sleeping preschoolers to their beds

B. He holds her against the dresser and rapes her

C. She would not make a sound because of waking the kids with such an act



XXIII.          Sarah leaves Mark and Carol we meet Anna

XXIV.          Anna takes Sarah to the Mistresses Zodiac

XX.          Matilda

The scenes are going to happen in the coven and the forest around it. Matilda will be defined as a child and a preteen in this chapter.



xvi.          Born in a witch ritual

xvii.          Her physical descriptions as a child

xviii.          Anna explains how she nursed her son off animals

xix.          She visits rituals

xx.          She plays with Damion



YY.          Matilda’s Power

Matilda learns her craft under the supervision of her mother Rose, Anna, and Willow



xiii.          Willow allowed Matilda to attend rituals, participate in them

xiv.          Anna teaches Matilda simple potion spells

xv.          Sarah works with her daughter on chants

xvi.          These three test Matilda to find her placement in the coven



ZZ.          Damion/Matilda

The scene takes place in the forest. They marry in the ash circle surrounded by birch trees in a ritual performed by Willow. These scenes are graphic-sexy scenes. After the wedding, Damion has to take the virginity of the girls over nineteen over the time of seven nights. The last scene is of the couple moving into their new home.

xiii.          Begins by Describing the wedding ceremony

xiv.          Each mother readies the other mother’s child for the ritual

xv.          The couple consummate their marriage on the alter

xvi.          The groom has to take the virginity of the girls over 25 in the coven with in the week wedding ritual



AAA.          Matilda’s Twins

This chapter is about Matilda and Damion welcoming their twins in the same circle that Matilda and Damion had conceived them during their wedding night.

x.          Chapter starts with the couple in the doctor’s office, and holding hands as they find out about having twins

xi.          Paragraph about the babies’ relationship in the womb

xii.          The babies as toddlers and young children



BBB.          Twins Dedication

First scene: The twins are three when Matilda and Damion meet Reverend Dallas at a farmer’s market. Another scene where the family has decided to visit the church

vii.          Getting the kids ready for church…

viii.          Thinking about combining this chapter with the chapter above



CCC.          Reverend Dallas

First scene: The twins are three when Matilda and Damion meet Reverend Dallas at a farmer’s market. Another scene where the family has decided to visit the church….. Getting the kids ready for church…

xiii.          His real name is Christian Rayvon Wright met Matilda and her family at the fruit market.

1.          He has long hair pulled back in a ponytail.

2.          goatee beard

3.          muscular arms with tattoos on both above the elbow

a.          right arm picture of praying hands “Jesus Saves”

b.          left arm, there was a picture of the crucifixion with a date. The date was the date that he was re-born a Christian.

xiv.          ten gallon hat with a large Eagle feather in the band

xv.          describes breakfast and challenges of getting toddlers ready for church

xvi.          Twins behavior in their first Sunday school class

1.          Questions about bible about their lessons at home

2.          Church gave girls a Book of Bible Stories



DDD.          Christianity

iv.          This scene will be of the battle in Matilda’s heart between her loyalties of witchcraft in which she was raised and the God she has grown to love.

1.          looks like

2.          what the family felt

3.          Matilda giving her life to the lord



EEE.          Family Leave

First scene is of Matilda packing to leave the coven. She is packing the children’s things when she has to explain her change of religion to Willow and Sarah.

viii.          Conversation with Willow and Sarah around her table

ix.          The tearful good byes between the women and children

1.          Anna has a hidden anger about her grandchildren leaving the coven

a.          Anna gives Mercy a talisman

i.          The wooden doll has a spell to bring her back to the coven one day

x.          The trip to back to New York to new church

         



FFF.          Twins go to School

Scenes Matilda leaving the girls at their first day at Christian Fellowship Pre-school. This will be a memory, and then the will end with Matilda and Damion sitting at their elementary graduation.

x.          The girls have an easy time separating from Matilda

xi.          Matilda didn’t have such an easy time

1.          Matilda sat in her car watching them enter school with tears in her eyes

xii.          The girls are dressed different in shinny dresses

1.          Mary in pink silk

a.          Hair back in a braid

2.          Mercy black “fake” leather

a.          Hair hanging in ringlets





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