Early morning dawn awakens
It greets the day on fiery wisps
Calling out, its still voice beckons
Take up your boat and head far out
Beyond the lands - grand, hold about
Sit and marvel, let silence dance
And you will find your perfect trance.
The form is a Saraband. There are 7 lines with 8 syllables in each. It has a rhyming pattern in the French version: a.x.a....b.b.c.c.
As for including conventions:
I have used assonance:
-lands grand
-boat and out can be depending on your pronunciation
-its still
I have used personification;
-in that the land holds onto the person
-in that the silence dances
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