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Rated: E · Poetry · Entertainment · #1867332
I know that there are many out there who do the same thing. My first dodoitsu poem.
Star Worship

Star I've worshipped from afar
Your smile makes me warm and swoon.
One hour's time is not enough.
The show ends. I smile.

The Dodoitsu poem form has 7/7/75 syllables. It is a Japanese form.
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