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Rated: · Fiction · Other · #1850639
its a suspence to find who is in the room...
a large house is there.bohat bada ghar.it consist of only a ground floor.On the two of four sides of dat house there are rooms.1 big room each of d two side..3rd side par main gate hain .....bahar gali ki taraf nikalne k liye....4th side par washroom hai....jahan do gates aur lage hai..ghar se bahar jane k.....aur un gates se nikalte hi ground hai....3rd side wala main gate gali ki tarah nikalte hue road par nikalta hai......



in sab se ye pata chalta hai ki ghar purane zamane jaisa bana hai...us ghar mein un 2 kamron mein se pehli wall par jo room h wahan koi nahi jaata...sab ko waha jaate darr lagta hai...us room mein koi rehta bhi nahi hai...hamsha kaala andhera us room ko ghere rehta hai.....raat ko sabhi ghar k log tak wahan jaane se darte hain.raat ko wo room viraan pada rehta h.....jo bhi banda raat ko us kamre mein jaata tha wo zinda wapis nahi aata........sabka kehna tha ki wahan koi aatma rehti hai...jo wahan jaane wale ko wapis nahi aane deti......



bahar ground mein kaafi bache khel rahe hai....un bachon mein 1 ladki h jiska naam sia h n her bro name is sid....sid ka frnd rachit bhi aaya hai saath khelne....aur unki 1 aur dost hai kaeshi who is sia n sid neighbour.......wo ghar sia n sid ka h...aur kaeshi unki padosi hai....sia ne dekha ki sid ki ankhon mein ansun hai....

sia"hey sid kya hua...y r u crying"

sia is elder than sid...

sid-"di....wo mummy sedaat padi hai bczo 97th ques mujhe nahi aa raha tha......"

sia-"its ok..aise ladkiyon ki tarah nahi rote'

is baat par sid aur chidchida jaata hai.......

tabhi sid ko washroom jaana hotahai..to wo ground se jo gate tha washroom ki taraf wo kholta hai...



as soon as he open d date kaeshi says"arey yahan bhi gate hai..."dat gate goes through a narrow way...ki agar sab wahi khade ho gaye to aane jaane ka raasta nahi milne wala.....



now d sky bcumes a little darker .....unka 1 dost abhay washrum jaane k baad usi dark room ki taraf badta hai ki is rum mein sia ki mummy jaane kyun ni deti...aisa kya hai yahan par.....chal dekhta hun.....jaise hi wo ander jaata hai .....after sum tym a sound only comes out...ahhhhhhh...........d dead body is thrown out.....



sab log dar jaate hai...ki ye aatma kab tak unhe yun hi pareshan karti rahegi............to sia ki mom ek taantrik ko bulati hai........taantrik poooja paath karta hai.........aur bhi bohat kuch daalta rehta hai room par....afterr few hrs he say ab kuch nahi hoga..u can live freely here.......aur moti taaji rakam hathoiya k jaata hai.........



next day se sab waha khelne lagte hai...ki achanak se unki baal uski room mein jaati h..........

sia- wahan koi mat jaao

rohit(her frnd)-ab kuch nahi hoga evrything is allright

sia- bt still

rohit-mein jaa raha hun ball lene.....

ye kahkar rohit wahan se ball lene chala jaata hai........

bohat der hojaati h par wo wapis nahi aata

sab k chehre par chinta chaai hai......

tabhi ekdum se rohit aata hai...aur zor zor se hasta hai

rohit-kya ullu banaya tm sab ko...jaao apni shakal dekho sab.....



bt still all r happy to see him back



rohit raulla dikhate hue- kaha tha na kuch ni hai...faltu mein tm sab darr rahe the....

after sum daz............

wen d sky is dark.....i.e . at nite rohit fir wahi usi room mein jaata hai...

raule mein.......

rohit-dekhna aaj bhi mujhe kuch ni hoga chalo tm log bhi chalo..aaj wahi khelenge...........bt wahan jaane ki kisi ki himmat nahi hui...so rohit shekhi dikhata hua khud hi akela chala gaya.............



boha der ho gai bt he not returned back.....

sab bache apne ghar chale gaye ki us din ki tarah nautanki karraha h....

subah jab dobara khelne aaye to dekha ki rohit ki dead body padi h..all get frightened ...ki ye kaise hua....



rachit k dimaag mein 1 baat aa rahi h ki subah jab bhi koi jaat ahai use kuch nahi hota...par raat ko jaaye to dead body aati h......he was totallly confused ..........



ab koi bhi sid n sia k ghar khelen nahi aata...............bcoz sab ko darr lagta hai......sid n sia r so sadd......ki us aatma ki vajah se ye sab ho raha hai..aur itni koshish k baad bhi wo nahi jaa rahi h............



bt kaeshi unki achi dost hai........wo aur rachit ab bhi unke ghar khelne aate hain.....for dem dere frnz r important...

sid us din stairs par betha ro raha tha..........

sia-hey sid kya hua..

sid-"mummy se fir se daat padi"

sia-"kyun fir se 97th ques galat kia kya......"

sid-"nahi is baar 97 th wala hi kia h..baaki sab galat kiye hai.....

sia-"hahhha"



sia"chalo cum lets play............



khelte khelte sid usi andhere kamre ki taraf chala jaata hai...........

dey all hear a scream frm inside.......

bt is baar rachit bina der kiye us kamre mein jaata hai.......

n is completely shocked to see wat was inside....wo bhagta hua bahar aata hai to dekhat hai ki sab us room k bahar khade hai..bt koi ander jaakar sid ko bacha nahi raha...............



rachit to sid mummy"aunty plz use bacha lijiye......."

sia save him............

chalo ander sab use bachate hain.............

bt sabko lag raha hai ki us aatma se kaise jeet payenge.......isliye sid ki mom fir se taantrik ko bulane ko kehti hai......ki ab wahi aakar sid ko bacha paayenge............

rachit-"aunty tantrik ki koi jarurat nahi hai.............wo koi aatma ya koi shakti nahi hai...its a person "..chaliye to..



jaise taise sab himmat jutakar room mein entry lete hai.........

bt us andhere mein unke 1 ladki ki frock dikhti hai..aur sid ki chillane ki aawaz sunai deti h.................



tabhi rachit torch ki light us forck par daalta hai.....aur fir us chehre par..................

evrything becums still

n they r shocked to see kaeshi having a lighter in her hand to kil others...............n she was going to kill sid....bt now sid is saved............



ab sabko puri baat samajh aai ki yesab din ko kyun ni hota bcoz din ko kaeshi unkesaath khelti hai....aur raat ko khel kahtam hone k baad she started killing others jinse wo game mein haar jaati h.............



isliye sab ki maut raat ko hui thi aur rohit tabhi us din mein bach gaya tha...bt raat ko nahi...tantrik to paise hathiya kar le gaya aatma ka jhoota naam lagakar..bcoz wo bhi kaeshi se mila tha.........



ye dosti nahi dhokebaazi thi.......



so before trusting sum1 be sure of d persons frndship........

kyunki aisi dosti pyaar ki dosti nahi sauda hai ................



aur sahiba dosti mein sauda nahi..............

so dosti mein kaeshi nahi..............
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