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by brrefo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E · Poetry · Other · #1797423
Thought of some changes I could make.
Is it the way you sing
as your whisper drifts through my soul
Or how on the dance floor
you're doing your thing
stepping to every relevant beat
no distraction
you're at attention
and you're lookin'
at me
as I twirl to your command
you move...
in close
I love the way you --

Is it the way you smile
'cause the blue in your eyes
is intoxicating
me
and suddenly I can't breathe
You take my life
and my need
for expression
to a whole new level of love
I've never
needed air like this before
you take my breath away…
I like the way you move

Is it the way you dance
as your beard brushes
my lips
I close my eyes
cause
You're makin' me  crazy
swirling on your incredible
energy
in slow motion
standing so close to me
needing you to touch—
me
I moan as your hands approach
my hips
standing toe-to-toe to me
your breath lingers                         
on my cheek
glancing slightly
into your eyes…
can't get too close
afraid that you'll find
I'm lost in you.
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