Yugioh! dragon duels chapter 1

My name's Yonsai, I'm a duelist. I'm about 15 years old and I live in the satillite. I've collected some rare and powerful cards that could cause terible destruction if in the wrong hands, but i'm not the wrong person. My story starts now...

I was wandering about the satilite, looking for someone to duel, when suddenly, I crashed into someone.
"hey, watch where your going!" The kid yelled,he looked about my age.
"Sorry, I was looking for someone to duel" I explaned. That's when I saw the kid had a duel disk. "Hey, you'r a duelist, wanna duel?" I asked
"Sure, what's your name? Mine's Sarx, but everyone calls me Sarge." He said.
"My name's yonsai..." I started "...And let's Duel!" I finished as we drew our starting hand.
Yonsai: 4000
Sarge: 4000

"I'll go first" I said. I drew a card and looked at my hand. I had drawn no level 4 or lower monsters, but had drawn two good traps. "I set three cards facedown and end my turn"
"My turn" Sarge said as he drew a card. "I'll set on card face down and summon mother grizzly in Atack mode!"(ATK:1400)"Now, I attack you directly!
"I activate sakuretsu armor! Mother grizzly is destroyed!
"I'll end my turn." sarge said.
"I'll draw!" I had drawn syncro magnet, a card that can't be normal summoned! I'll end my turn.
"My turn!I activate reload!" Sarge added his hand to his deck, shuffled, and drew new cards. "I activate legendary city atlantis!I end my turn."
"my draw!" I had drawn fighting spirit, useless. "I end my turn"
"I'll draw!I end my turn"
"at least I'm not the only one having deck troubles, draw!" Finaly! I had drawn Draguinity darkspear, a monster I could summon! "I summon Draguinity darkspear in atack mode! (ATK:1000) now, I'll activate stamping destruction! You'r facedown card is gone!" The card was Xing Zen Hu, a card that locked down traps/ spells on the field. "Now, you lose 500 Life points!

Yonsai: 4000
Sarge: 3500

"Now,I equipt darkspear with fighting spirit and he attacks you directly! You lose 1000 more life points! I'll end my turn!

Yonsai: 4000
Sarge: 2500

"I draw! I activate hammer shot and destroy darkspear! I end my turn."
"My turn! I summon draguinity javilin in atack mode!" (ATK:1200) I had just drawn that card. "Now, he attacks you directly! I'll end my turn.

Yonsai: 4000
Sarge: 1300

"I'll go! I summon mother grizly in atack mode! (ATK:1400->1600) My monster will atack Javilin!"
"I'll use scrap iron scarecrow to negagate that attack!"
"fine, I'll end my turn"
"Ok, I'll go now!" I had drawn mage power. "I'll tribute javilin to summon... White horned dragon, in atack mode!(ATK:2200) now, I'll remove your two spell cards from play and my dragon gains 600 atack!(ATK:2200->2800) Next, I'll activate mage power, giving my dragon 500 ATK points for each spell and trap on my field!(ATK:2800->4300) White-horned dragon! attack mother grizly for the win!

Yonsai: 4000
Sarge: 0

I put my deck away and walked over to Sarge. "Hey, nice duel, you lasted a lot longer than others did. Here, if you want I can help you get better." I offered.
"Thanks, Yonsai. You're nicer than many of the people around here." With that, he took my hand and I helped him up.
"Let's go." with that, we walked off.