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Rated: · Poetry · Romance/Love · #1787106
This is my first love poem. It is about a young man expressing his thoughts of love.
On the first day I saw you
I thought I was dreaming
You look so beatiful
as a red rose that's blooming
You smile to me
and I was glad it was me

I think about you day and night
searching for the right words
to say when I got you in sight
so i decided to study words
thinking that words may convince her
to show that I was so in love with her

Oh what can I do?
would she accept me?
or would she say boo?
I am so shaking as a bee
when thinking about the possible consequences
and how it could affect my consciousness

No I must do it
I said to myself
no gain unless you ventured it
so I took my shells
went to her and express my feelings
She replied to me and say she is pending
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