"Scare Me" contest entry |
Here is my story "What Peter Saw" : "Hey Tom? Tell me about Old-Man What's-His-Name, down on the corner, you know who I'm talking about. What IS wrong with him?" Peter asked his older brother. "Old-Man Timber? Well kiddo, I don't know, because he spends all his time cooped up in that house. But I heard Mom talking about him to a friend on the phone, and she said he's mute! He can't talk! Weird, huh?". Peter mulled this over in his head. Knowing that the Old-Man couldn't talk wasn't satisfying at all, it simply doubled the intrigue, and he needed to know even more. Tom patted him on the shoulder as he headed to the door. "I gotta go to work now sport, but you remember the rules, right?" asked Tom, "Stay in the yard, don't watch too much TV, don't play too many video games..." Peter replied sulkily. Tom laughed and said "It's not that bad. Mom will be back at 8 tonight, before I get home, so be good!". Tom smiled, winked and waved goodbye, chuckling as he left. As soon as the front door closed, Peter raced to the living room. Tom had left all his games out! A smile cracked across Peter's face. He turned on the TV, blew the dust out of a game cart, and plugged it in to the Nintendo. "Today I will finally beat Mega-man!" he exclaimed to no-one in particular. Time slowed as he watched the pixels drift across the screen, and the tinny music put him into a trance. Something kept bugging Peter as he played, and he soon noticed that he kept dying as his play was punctuated with a "Game Over" screen. "Old-Man Timber!" he suddenly thought. He had been overwhelmed with glee upon seeing Tom's sly gesture of kindness. It was summer vacation; his last summer before high-school; and his best friend had gone on away to some island with his family. Video-games were about the only thing he had to do when Tom and their Mom were at work - they had a small yard which he wasn't SUPPOSED to leave when he was home alone. What he thought now, was that he might be able to just cut through the ravine that ran behind all the houses on the street, and investigate Timber's property, just a little... With his hiking boots Peter picked his way through the trees that clung to the rocky slope - mostly cedars and birches. He could see into his neighbor's back yard, and then their neighbors, and theirs. It would be 3 more houses to the timber residence. As the property came into view he noticed that where his other neighbors had lawns, Old-Man Timber had an extension of the woods in the ravine, with thick unmanaged underbrush. Through gaps in the trees, he spotted the house; the dark brown dilapidated siding seemed almost a natural part of the forest, but the white stucco on the lower half of the first floor gleamed dully like bleached bone. The muggy heat of the day seemed to be intensified by the thickening of the gloomy clouds overhead. He walked carefully onto the grounds, barely able to see the last house he passed to the right for the growth. The back of the house became clear as he approached. Old aspens, black pines and bedraggled birches with dark eyes watched as he passed and the trees opened in to a semi-circle around the back of the house. The vegetation seemed old and sickly, and the grass nearest to the house was just plain dead or dying. Peter stayed in the shadows of the wood, and tried to determine if anyone could see him snooping. The back of the house was practically shuttered up. Any window that wasn't closed over had a shade drawn, the color of each drained over time by the sun. The vertical wooden siding looked as if had been stained, and it was cracked and rotting where it could. The stucco was pale and dirty where the rain from broken gutters had tirelessly splattered mud against it every spring and fall. Little snags of moss clung to the larger cracks. A cement patio protruded from the back door - it's window shuttered, and tears of rust streamed across it running from foundation towards the earth, frozen in time. Peter made his way up to the house, satisfied that no-one could see him, and noticed that the window into the basement was not covered or obscured in anyway, and he decided to steal a glimpse into the dingy portal. He knelt on the dusty dry ground around the house and peered through. As his pupils widened he noticed movement, and finally the dark-gray figure of Old-Man Timber came into focus in the broom. Old-Man Timber was pacing back and forth manically. He shook his head violently and often, and waggled his skeletal hands almost as frequently. He kept turning to a part of the basement that Peter couldn't see, and seemed to be yelling at someone there. As angry as he looked, he seemed just as frightened. The scene continued as if it was always on; everything was framed in a tangled silhouette of what looked like cords or wires, boxes, and strange angular antenna- like filigrees. "He isn't mute!" Peter thought to himself. "Nobody sees him or talks to him, but he's talking to someone!". He put his ear close to the window to see if he could make it out, but could hear nothing other than the river in the ravine rushing quietly some distance behind him. What He had seen through the window had bothered him, but now he had to figure out what was happening. The one thing he had found out about Old-Man Timber (aside from his name), was that he was mute, something that had now been directly contradicted. If he could just get inside the house a little, he might be able to hear what was being said so vividly. Creeping to the back door, Peter tried the handle curiously, and to his surprise, it turned, the hollow and dented matte brass knob grinding and squeaking as it did. The inky kitchen greeted him slowly as he opened the door. With some courage he walked into Old- Man Timber's house, determined to solve the mystery he believed he had found. Closing the door blocked out the glare of the day, and slowly as before he began to be able to see. The kitchen smelled musty and old, and looked the same. Dishes were piled everywhere, and moldy bread sat in a pile of dry crumbs, lit by the sliver of sterling light that made it's way in through a crack in the shade. As he moved into the living room to his left, he noticed that it was filled with electronics of every kind. Boxes that had been pried open leaked wires into the boxes below them and green leds blinked pointlessly in the hum it all made. Tool and bits of wire and metal parts and things he didn't recognize at all covered every available surface that Peter could see. On a whiteboard he was able to make out "Developing the signal" amongst all sorts of strange characters and equations. He also noticed that aside from the hum, everything was still very quiet. "Maybe Old-Man Timber isn't yelling, maybe the conversation is over!" He thought, panic flushing through him. However, he couldn't hear movement or any signs of life at all. Almost automatically he moved through the room, using the thin path that Timber himself had founded through the techno-debris, and realized that he must be above where Old-Man Timber and his guest were. Turning into the hallway that led to the front of the house and the garage, he saw the door to basement, open. The bottom of the stairs was bathed in a dark red light, their sides enclosed by bare wooden framing alone, only blackness seen through the gaps. The hum which he thought had come from the machines in the living room was louder, a low bass drone that sounded almost like a continuous growl or purr. Without thinking, Peter began to make his way slowly down the stairs, because he could hear nothing but this grating hum, and he was sure he had seen Old-Man Timber, sure of it. Ever so slowly he moved from step to step, everything dull and crimson in the light. The basement too was filled with strange equipment and wires. Peter thought that perhaps the house was so dark so that all the power could be diverted to these machines. The noise had developed in a ticking and churring symphony of artifact sounds. One of the sources of light became visible to Peter, the kind they must use in photo labs. He was nearing the bottom of the stairs, and was intensely focused on the basement to the right, which was divided by a wall preventing him from seeing into the back, where he was sure Old-Man Timber still was. Finally his view gave way, and he was able to see part way into the back room. Everything was bathed in the hellish haze of the photo lights. Old-Man Timber was indeed still there, hectically pacing and gibbering in his puzzling way. He was completely silent. His wild gesticulations were as intense as ever, but there was still no sound. He paced and shook, his eyes rolling and gleaming, and looked like a mad man. His guest was still out of view. Peter began to move, even slower than before, into the basement. He had to see, to complete the scene, to try to understand. He moved through the shadows of boxes and Timber's equipment, and finally spied red light from a hole in the shoddy wall separating the back room. The hum became louder, and introduced to it was a strange electronic chirp, which reminded Peter of when the Nintendo had stopped working properly, or when he had picked up a fax for his Mom. Gingerly, he put his eye to it. This is what he saw: Old-Man Timber was ever pacing. To the right, in a dark corner, was where he pointed angrily and gestured accusingly. Filling most of the wall was a wooden Bureau without doors, easily 9 feet high. Affixed to it's outsides were endless wires and antenna, all kinds of boxes attached to it. The interior of the box looked grainy and strange. It looked like the snow on TV, Peter thought. Within this distorted recess there was a man, easily 8 feet himself. He was ashen and dark, black and white in the lighting. From the nose up he was completely obscured in the darkness. From the terrible and menacing grin on his face came the glitchy chirping sound, a mewling and distorted buzz, syncopated above the horrible bass chug of the machinery, an unending stream of ghostly nonsense, and it was to this that Old-Man Timber was responding with his voiceless wrath. When he finally saw this, Peter stumbled back from the hole, knocking a box over with a clatter. The mumbling digital whisper stopped, and the soft sound of Old-Man Timber pacing did also. Without thinking, Peter got on his feet and bolted. He ran through the basement. He ran through the hallway. He ran stumbling through the living room. He ran out the kitchen, leaving the door open behind him. He ran through the ravine all the way home. That night Peter's Mom came home from work, and noticed the video-games in the living room that Peter had meant to put away when he got back. She climbed the stairs and called sternly through Peter's closed door: "Peter! Have you been playing video- games all day?!". After a moment, his tired and shaken voice said "...No.". The End. |