The mother star sings;
her words a nurturing song
of warmth and bright promises.
The damp earth responds,
giving birth to a swaying
flower reaching for the sun.
Notes
An entry in Round 10 of "Poetic Exploration" [E]
Form: Sedoka The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, a pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives.
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