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Rated: E · Other · Emotional · #1728485
Challenge: choose 1 event that affected two people in different ways. I chose birth.
Glaring bright and loud
Looking for my warm cocoon
I open my mouth and wail

Pink tiny angel
I count ten fingers and toes
Oh what perfection!

Note: This is a work in progress. I plan to write additional stanzas. Looking for some initial critique. Thanks!
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