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Rated: 13+ · Campfire Creative · Appendix · Horror/Scary · #1711265
A moving and frightening horror about a little girl with a disturbing secret
[Introduction]
Hey guys, this is cutie*Heart* here to tell you about this story that tells the story about a girl named Emily, whom has just recently began having horrifying nightmares of a stark white child around her age in a nightgown and long, black hair.
In her nightmares, she hears strange noises and by the end is killed only to wake up and find she was only dreaming. However, she feels everything in her dreams and most often, they're unexplainable.

Later on, she begins hearing soft whispers and cries from above her room, then later smells death in certain places, feels something ice cold grabbing her at times, tastes something ghastly and corspe-like in her dinner, and finally begins seeing a little girl around her age as she sees her in her dreams.

This has begun since she has met a new boy that has recently moved into her neighborhood. He is quite mysterious and tells her many strange things about a book he has read that he believes set a curse onto him. When she reads it later after he dies from an unknown cause, she is determined to figure out whom has killed the boy she fell in love with.
This leads to a disasterous and psychological journey where she slowly is turning mad.

I will give you two weeks to write at least a paragraph continuing the story. If you fail to do so, I will automatically remove you unless you email me a good reason why you can't submit your part on time. This story needs to meet these requirements: It needs to be interesting. (No matter how long you make your entry, it needs to capture attention, and almost always have something new going on.) It needs to be gradual. (PLEASE it should be interesting but do not rush anything, as it will appear sloppy and overall, a mediocre story.) It needs to be scary. (This is so very important, as this is supposed to be scary, as it is about a girl seeing ghosts and such.) It needs to be descriptive. (Paint me a picture, describe senses, use colorful vocabulary, and by that I don't mean using profanity, rather I mean using less basic words to describe. Try using a thesaurus to find more suitable versions of a word, such a changing good to fantastic, or pretty to lovely, etc.) It should be told in first person, and in a slightly poetic language. (For instance, instead of, "I heard whispers in my room, and it was scary." Go, "These whispers I have heard have me growing fearsome, they are grasping my mind and gnawing into my trembling skin.") AND MOST IMPORTANTLY, PLEASE EMAIL ME YOUR ENTRIES BEFORE YOU SUBMIT THEM PLEASE SO I CAN TELL YOU IF YOU NEED TO CHANGE ANYTHING TO FILL THESE REQUIREMENTS. Thank you, and have fun!

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