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Rated: 13+ · Poetry · Emotional · #1708428
As yet unedited piece inspired by a dream. Constructive criticism welcomed!
I tried to kill you
In a dream
I pulled the trigger
Of a revolver
You never flinched
Never took your eyes off mine
As the bullet exploded
In slow motion above your head
And rained down
A technicolour confetti of memories
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