Chunky Monkey/ Childrens Book

This is my first attempt at writing a childrens book so please let me know what you think.  Is it ready for submission.



OK I tried making it rhyme let me know how it turned out



1.I am a chunky monkey can you not see. 



2.I live in a peach tree with my family and the peaches are always sweet.



3.Right now I’m all alone and very very bored.



4.I am going to window of mylook out my  tree house to see who is around tha I adore.



5.There is the little girl next door who is swimming in her pool.



6.I think I will go join her, I bet the water is very cool



7.I climb down the tree, jump over the fence.



8.I jumped right in the pool and scared the little girl away with great suspense.



9.On my way back to my peach tree I see the cat next door.



10.I think I will try and catch it. This will be lots of fun I can adore..



11.As I was sneaking up behind it I felt a needle in my leg.



12.It was a bug with wings and a very long sharp peg.



13.I let out a yelp and started to itch. 



14Well the cat was scared too bad I missed it.



15.On my way back to my peach tree to see what else I could do today.



16.My brother knocked me down and I could not get him to obey.



17.So I threw him off me and got on top of him this time.



18.I started to tickle him and I was not going to stop this onetime.



19.We played in the yard for maybe an hour till it was time for a snack



20.Then I got up and helped brush him off so we could be quick to get up to the old shack.



21.Everyday can be a fun day. It just matters on who you spend it with.

THE END