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Rated: 13+ · Short Story · Teen · #1682846
A short story about Jane and Carter's first date. They night they truely fell inlove.
I was setting in my room looking in the
mirror when the door bell rang.
I jumped at the sound of it.
I stood up checking my makeup again. And walked down stairs to answer the door. I wore a dress dress that went to my mid leg with a black leather jacket and black ackle heels. I had my dark brown hair in curls falling over my shoulders. I threw my cell phone on the loveseat and opened the door. He was soo beautiful. He had his dark brown his pushed to the side out of the way of his bright blue eyes. He had on a black shirt with a black jacket and black dress pants. He was smiling his beautiful smile as he handed me a dozen beautiful daisys. I smiled.
"You remembered." I said smiling.
"Of course, I did. They're your favorite. I'd never forget anything we said or talked about. By the way, you look sooo very beautiful tonight, Jane." he said as I set the flowers down on the table as he took me hand and lead me to the park where are date was. He held my hand as we walked to are midnight picnick. Once we got there we both sat in the chairs and talked for hours. When he finally checked his watch to see what time it was. It was already 2 am.
"Oh, crap. I better get you home." He said as he grabbed my hand and lead me home.
We finally made it to my front door and we turned to face eachother.
"I hope we get to see eachother again soon, Jane." he said as he leaned in to kiss me.
"Goodnight, Carter." I said as I walked into my house.
And it was the most perfect date and night ever. Thanks to Carter Jackson. I was 17 and in love.

The End.
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