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Rated: · Poetry · War · #1673151
a poem about foolishness
Many a bunch walking down a street
Holding hands waiting to be seized

It was their decision that got them captured
even on their mainland i really don't think it mattered

They had great strength and power
even with this they didn't last an hour

They should have won cause they were on their home land
but they couldn't last long and gave up the stand

They had retreated too back into the center
making the enemies finish the war before winter

Even though it was one mans orders that brought their fall
everyone was to blame cause it was also their call

Foolish people i would say.....
cause they didn't even have time to pray

Many a bunch walking down the street
hands far from each other already seized
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