A poem i wrote just seeing if i can get a rate or suggestions about it. |
Words stoned me thru a tornado The cave echos its secrets that are engraved in its walls We release are secrets between lines thru bars,stanzas and melody Which hold the foundation I speak to people with minds and ears But when i look their souls are empty These lines, this stanza starts as any introvert When spoken the tone of their octave blows us away In shock like the aftermath of any eruption Plates from beneath our feet shift as if a sign Hearts pound in unison as a solid bass The attention is as sharp as a snare Such harmonies bring peace and tranquility Such lyrics cover all with understanding and acceptance Like a blanket gently laid over to protect and hide The chorus is chanted over and over as if a prayer Empty souls have been awaken and all spirits have risen to the occasion Each verse tapped into ones self as if the message is knighting its soldier With the orchestra strong behind the secret all have acknowledged its message Guilt and shame have fallen like a lightening struck sky that pours rain Fulfilling its destiny, its out The secret strums on every note that plays a chord Like a framed photo all are as still as a pose, captured Still the secret and message marinates Attention all your my audience and my theme |