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Rated: E · Poetry · Dark · #1650863
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Scars of Heaven (Revised)

Not a stain.
Not a blot of color remains on these four walls.
Forlorn and lifeless.
Intrinsically silenced.
Disillusioned to the brow.

Flickering mentality.
Overwhelming insecurity.
Mortified by the deafening silence,
Gasping for a breathless pang.
Memories of past and present become pale in comparison to hearts decree.

Amidst the darkest of shadows, dreams prevail.
Within open arms of graceful comfort,
Eyes rusted shut are made seen clear.
Savior; virtue of desired will, take note and hold dear.
Every heartfelt beat, every loving gesture, is and will remain faithfully yours
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