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by Killy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ · Poetry · Teen · #1617853
A simple poem about breaking up.
*This is a work in progress. criticism and advise are wanted*


I smile on the outside
Like it's all okay
But it is only a facade
To hide dismay

It has been a while
But I still cannot
Get over you
In a love web, I am caught

You want to be friends
But this can't work
You're still with me in my head
And in my dreams, you lurk

I can't look in your eyes
Without crying inside
I saw you with another girl
And now I'm dying inside
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