The Hunsucker Bar Angel

"Finish your drinks everyone!"the Bartender called"The bar will be closing in about fifteen minutes, Anyone inside by thenwill be kicked out"
Some moans and grunts could beheard around the bar but only a few actually left the bar. In the far left corner a man sat vacantly, slowly siping his beer ocationally.Another man who was about to leave noticed him, and his curiosity sparked. He walked to the man wth a casual air and asked to join him.
"Shouldn't you be making a break for it"the vacant man asked
"Well, I felt you needed some company"the curious man replied"May I?"
"Go ahead"
"So what are you doing?
"drinking and dwelling in the mistakes, by the way my name is Paul"
"Nice meeting you Paul, my name is..."a sudden crash in the entrance interrupted him"What the...?"
Two huge monsters entered the bar, blowing away the entrance and two young couples that were about to get out. They stood about seven feet tall, and theyhad some spacesuit like clothes. Their eyes were small but they had an inhuman shine upon them, wich only made their only hairs(about six hairs spreaded in their heads) look a tad normal. The remaining people rushed behind the counter, looking for shelter.The monsters spoke with a deep, yet squeaky voice.

"We are from the planet-impronunciable word- and we are what youd call a psycologist"he made a sign to the other one and he left the bar."Ill ask you all some questions, anyone who wont comply is free to leave" following that he stepped aside from the door. Out of the eleven persons in the bar(aside from the bartender) only paul, the other man, an old man, a whore and an elegantly dressed couple stayed. The others left in panic. Actually, the ones that stayed would have followed but the terrorized screams and a loud noise like that of a bomb stayed their steps.
"first question, what is your name?"
"Paul"
"Marcos"Paul looked at him and shook his hand
"My clients know me as Candy, but my name is Cassandra"
"Larry"the bartender said
"I am Carlos, and this is my wife Denisse"
"Who you punk thenk ye're to talk all high and mighty"the old man yelled "Im Liutenant McDonald, you beter treat me with some respect"
"Very well, old man..."
"Liutenant!"
"Liutenant, my question for you is why did you left the active service in the army, if you are so proud of it?"
The old man looked astonished, his face grew gloom with painful memories while the monster stared at him, making mental note of everything he did.
"I was once one respected officiant, not anymore. My daughter died in a bomb atack in the city, and I massacred a village in Irak. The pain the hunger of my vengeance blinded me, I remember clearly. My wife abandoned me, all of that has happened this past month, along with my dishonorable discharge from the service"he said, tears filling his eyes"So the fear of dying isnt going to stop me if you would kill me do your worst!"Saying that he valiantly walked outside, only to be killed the same the others were.Wrong answer.
And you, Candy, why is it that you dedcate to the worlrds oldest proffesion?"
"Oh, that ones easy, I like the money, so I use my best weapon to win it, is that so bad as to kill me" she said
leaving.Wrong answer.
Paul couldnt believe his eyes and then it all turned blurry, a voice called form afar.
He woke up to find the bartender looking at him.
"Hey we will be closing in about five minutes, please pay yousr bill"
"Here take this, keep the change"
Paul looked around, eveyone there was the same as his dream. The gloomy old man, the curious guy and the whore and the couple... everyone.He walked to the old man and asked him"Are you thinking of suicide?"the old man looked at him quizically
"How did you know I..."
"Listen, I dont know why, but something told me to tell you, thats the wrong answer"
"Thank you son, I think I get whatcha mean"saying that he shook Pauls hand and left.
Paul went outside the bar, a cold chill made him looked to the left and he saw Candy about to get in a car with a client.
"Stop! Ill pay you twice as much!"the driver screeched his tires and left, he didnt have that sum, he tought Paul was crazy to be willing to pay so much for a slut.
"Listen I will pay you as promised, and I want to offer you a decent work"
"Whatever do mean"
"I own a store, I sell candy, if you want I can give you a better job Cassandra"
"How do you know my name?"
"If I told you, you wouldnt believe me"
"Fine, I take the job"she said smiling"So show me the place"
"Follow me its only a short walk from here"they started walking, he stopped and looked back, thinking to himself about how he had been inspired by a dream to help two persons. Yet he wandered to himself, just how much will that help do to change the world. Just then he saw the monster on top of the sign that said "Hunsucker Bar" smiling at him. The monster winked at him and in a flash he turned into a beautiful angel, fading away in the night.
"Hey slowpoke, what are you looking at?"
"I just remembered that miracles happen in the most unexpected places..."
the two walked animatedly, into the crowds of the city.
aprox. 680 words, i am a little bad with counting so much and my eyes hurt...