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by Jello Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E · Poetry · Entertainment · #1557124
A description of a rollercoaster and its line.





The hot sun bleating on my face.
People cutting in line like its a race.
Moving forward very slowly
I am feeling oh so lowly

I've been waiting for several hours
I look up and see how it towers.
What am I waiting for you say?
I love what i'm waiting for all the way.

I wait for a rollercoaster, isn't that fun?
My wait in line is almost done.
I'm getting closer to the front.
I mean several hours! What a stunt?

I'm going next what a thrill!
I need to calm down. I need to chill.
The last ride rolls on down.
The looking like a frown.

We get on the ride, I am excited!
Me again on the coaster, United!
It starts to move, I get a chill.
It turns to see the 1st hill.

A sudden stop what could this be?
A count down from three?
"Three, Two, One!"
This will be lots of fun.

We zoom up, what a view!
Look at the sky! Oh so blue.
I get a feeling as we start to fall.
The roller coaster is a rag doll!

We turn so sharp I start to scream.
I realize this is so extreme!
I love this ride! Its so fun!
and its not even close to done!

We go up the hill, some music plays.
Many of us, in a daze.
We start to fall, we start to yell.
We fall to the depths of hell.

At the last second it turns upright.
We shoot back up to the great height!
We twist and turn, I let out a, "Whoop!"
But suddenly I see a loop!

We go toward it fast as ever.
I will remember this forever.
I see it, its straight ahead!
The gleaming coaster, Oh so red.

Next thing you know i'm upside-down.
I feel so I look around.
Before you know it the loop is done.
I feel like the coaster has just begun!

It starts to slow, is this the stop?
Nope, here comes another drop!
I go down fast, with a kick.
The train is moving oh so quick!

We go down once more, to see a flash.
This is funner than a birthday bash!
The flash was my picture which I can buy.
I look up again into the sky.

I want to feel the wind on my face.
But I can't, we're back in place.
We get off the ride, wanting more.
We feel much different than before.

As I run to get back in line.
I get a tingling in my spine.
Is this too bad? Is this not good?
Oh its gone, just like it should.

I look up at that mighty beast
I'm happy to go on it at the very least.
Before today, I thought I would've died.
But now, i'm going again, on the greatest ride.
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