Dear Writer (a re-vamp of a v:1)

Back story:  I wrote the original in back in 2007 (as if it was that long ago lol) and as I was rereading I thought wow I can write that much better...bim bam boom, here it is=>


My re-vamped, V:2 written in beginning of 2008

dear writer, give yourself to me

- sara jaymz -

in the dark of night, with the sense of urgency,
her hands clutch her bed sheets- she pleads:

dear writer, give yourself to me-
let our whispers become moans
and the warmth of your skin be known.

But sleep does not come and so she whispers:

My desire to touch you seems endless.
So I wait,
And I ache,
Anticipating the passion our rare moments create.
I beg of you - the real you - please be curious.
Let your future actions be bold.
Abandon her restraints; let me taste your soul.

I want you on me; inside me; I want you whole.


- sara jaymz -




My original, V:1  written 2007

We, The Unbalanced Lovers

- sara jaymz -

It seems endless,
my desire to touch you.

It is eternity in a glance
(envy at its best)
When I look at you I know,
you are that 'someone just for me'.

I wish to find a way
to have you fly back to me,
I need to create wings
to be flown through midnight dreams.
A sort of fairytale
in which the reality is the nightmare,
and dreaming is a sweet release.

I try to get a taste of what's to come
but it seems I'm drowing in what I've done.


- sara jaymz -

Sara Jaymz