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Rated: 13+ · Book · Sci-fi · #1343591
A sci-fi Novella I've been working on for a scholarship. 'Could use some good critique...
Fall of the Cerbeus takes place in an alternate universe in which mankind has begun to expand his territory. One colony, known as Shinar, has sparked open rebellion upon the democracy that birthed it. Thus the Federation decides to take action, and sends a deployment to restore order to the boisturous planet. Behind the rebellion however, lies a dark agenda...

Due to lack of time, it should be completed by the end of the month. Would love to hear any thoughts/comments!
#4. Chapter 1
ID #547091 entered on November 5, 2007 at 5:54pm
#3. Chapter 2
ID #547093 entered on November 5, 2007 at 6:05pm
#2. Chapter 3
ID #547094 entered on November 5, 2007 at 6:13pm
#1. Chapter 4
ID #547095 entered on November 5, 2007 at 6:28pm

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