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Rated: E · Poetry · Relationship · #1256169
Short poem. References Hendrix and Christ.
Jimi warned of castles made of sand
Jesus, of foundations set on beaches
I laid my bricks in shaky earth
The tide came as she inevitably would
And tore my house to shreds
I lay now in the ruins of a former life
And nature can't be trusted
Today I must collect what's left
And find my solid ground
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