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Rated: 13+ · Poetry · Other · #1109085
This is a small poem that I wrote the other day I desperatly want feedback on it
The world is warning
That we are not forming
The way we should be now
We are ending
Never sending
People in the right direction
This is the thing that needs correction
War is our ending
Not the begginning
When will we understand
If we follow the lord
Don't take to a sword
then we will be free eternally.
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