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Rated: 13+ · Book · Friendship · #1103622
College students face obstacles they never imagined, to get a goal they never dreamed of.
This is a work in progress...still my first draft, still unfinished--you get the picture! It began over last Thanksgiving break as the result of a disagreement I had with my cousin and her boyfriend, and I like what it has become.
The plot is very hard to summarize for a number of reasons (one being that I have not yet reached the climax), but it primarily centers around a group of karate instructors and one of their students. The main characters tend to be very different from one another, as many friends are in the real world.
Since I haven't yet gotten the chance to thoroughly edit this yet, please leave any constructive criticism necessary--especially if it involves references that don't make sense or seem clear. In addition, any advice on conversation/description expansions would not go amiss!
Thanks!
#1. Chapter 1--Main character introduction--title in progress :)
ID #424501 entered on May 8, 2006 at 3:52pm


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