This is a first draft poem based on a dream. The begining needs help. |
"these dreams go on when its' cold outside these dreams go on when i close my eyes every second iM awake i live another life." Once upon a time... there was a young woman Alice named, and alice was the sweetest thing loving and kind. in a garden filled with flowers vines and leaves there was no pain beauty was no malice.. and the joy was rain. One day a man came said Alice Alice you've got to run there's a fire filled with pain and your name and it's coming from the sky Alice alice you've got to fly your home to be in flame or you will surely die and her friends cried out her name and some hung back in shame as it hurtled from the sky BUT some they CAME cried alice , alice we love you. As Alice flew out through the night and our warriors struggled on as Alice sang her lonely song If i should die before i wake i wonder if my soul will break? If i should wake before i die must i always wonder why? and the angel told them y Alice will/ may surely die alice light shine much 2 bright and in her heart there's a new start of which we all may play a part eternity may fly straight from a love filled eye. but everyone MUST try how do we know it's not an other lie? alice/and beloved whispered near Still the warriors struggled on for they really had to try through sickness famine too Eating mushrooms falling down a rabbit hole In the jungle desert too in the struggle some they died.. but still our angels flied As the fire filled with pain came hurtling missing alice in the rain On the edge of a cliff alice hanging on a ledge came the fire filled with pain a devil whispering alice name as alice nearly falls batman hears her lonely calls swoops in from above which fills her heart with LOVE running in and out of caves holding back the dark abyess alice heart is filled with bliss batman tries then batman flies and tries to tell her something true but his heart is too blue and our devil grey and blue calls to alice and to you metal man in pain SCREaming alice name. and our heros.. all fall down in the water with no sound and our devil (whose IN pain) says to alice have you no shame? here i called and called your name don't u know this thing is true? that i kill me cause i kill u? from me there is no free. for i am part of you (and we need the key, inside u) Didn't batman tell u? and alice saw what was true. them expldoing both in pain bits and pieces me and u and she swam through through and she struggled through 2 find a way to save the day drawing it from friends away... and to end it's hunger pain she swam into the cave and willed away his pain but alice died anyway his quarry trapped that way bullets/ missles flew away (tired) taking with them? all his pain Alice ' (all hearts broken blue) alice.. he cried...and he tried to save her 2 seeing what he'd done alice is the only one alice i love u... but alice torn assunder too in the fire.. in the pain. in the flowers of her name as the spasms rip her through.. all the flame Does it matter? is it true? Did alice die 4 u? when hero isn't true and the villian is you and isn't true/is true... but in the shadows of the light and in the dieing soul take flight theres a little you an me and Alice dieing Lost in pain sees we through the rain. "rage rage agianst the dying of the light.. do not go softly into that great night." |