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Rated: E · Poetry · Arts · #1089621
this one is about surrealism, enjoy
Surreal

Makes our minds think, so surreal
Is it junk or Is it progressive?
Pieces of work, expresses feelings so real

Erratic vexations conveyed, hard to feel
Every piece with an edge of expressive
Makes our minds think, so surreal

Conflicting our tamed eyes, kicks us in the heel
Not at all unimpressive
Pieces of work, expresses feelings so real

A deep breath of resolutions, trivial or unreal
Touches a nerve, mind says too much excessive
Makes our minds think, so surreal

Every person gives a resentful stare, so ideal
So chaotic, each message transgressive
Pieces of work, expresses feeling so real

No notorious message, dealing with it’s own ordeal
Each its own phenomenon, reactions usually aggressive
Makes our minds think, so surreal
Pieces of work, expresses feelings so real
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