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"But I wanna be noticed." Fianne complained. "Like changing your look?" Kiwa said putting on some candy pink lipgloss. "Not really. Just, changing character"
"Which, if you ask me, is changing your look."
"Well, thats what YOU see it as."
"So, who do you wanna `impress` then?"
"I'm not telling you, you'll tell everyone!"
"Whatever."
Fianne tossed a few of her brown curls back. "It's just all I have thats not to small or to big are my green t-shirt with a hotpink flower on and this one." She tugged her denim three quarter lenghs. Then, a boy with a blue and white striped polo shirt knocked on the door. His small ginger afro was sticking out. He had baggy jeans and blue trainers. "Hey babe" Kiwa said snogging the boy. I suppose they were the perfect couple. She was quite plump, was wearing a pink cardigin and a rose button t-shirt. She had the most gross skirt I have ever seen, it was a long pink one and she was wearing a tidy pony tail. She had greasy brown hair and pink highheels. Not a good combanation. Fianne picked up her text book and turned down the weird music they put on well they were kanoodling. She stomped upstairs holding back tears. She had never had someone who liked her too, she did have this crush once, but that was years back. She sneeked into her sister's (Kiwa) bedroom. Even though her clothes were to big for her, she did have this pink scarf and really tight blue short dress. This was great because there was a school dance happening this weekend. Fianne went to bed at 8:30 that night, she wanted to choose what she could do to her hair, boring uniform and makeup. She straightened her hair, put on a short grey school skirt and a white shirt. She chose some over-knee white stockings and some black high bootlegs. She had to put on a green tigh on but she did it kind of scruffy. She grabbed her bag and jogged to the school bus where Paul Daniels (cutest guy in school) was waiting. Fianne climbed onto the bus after Paul. She scrambled to see he was sitting alone. Then, she didn't wanna sit next to Becky prep bitch face. So she sat there and gazed at him. It was raining outside, "It's raining" he said in his deep voice, "yeah, it's raining alright." She blushed a little. Kiwa was sitting with her boyfriend, Kyle. "YUCK!" she whispered as Kiwa snogged him, again. "What is?" Paul asked,
"My sister and Kyle."
"Yeh, I suppose."
"Yeh" Fianne went into a sort of dream where he asked her to be his girlfriend, "Yes, I will!" she said outloud,
"Yes you will... what?" shaun said.
"Oh, um.... Take an icecream?"
"Ok..."
Oh great, now he thinks I'm a freak, just act cool. This was your crush, and he was TALKING TO YOU! "You know, I'm not another freak like Kiwa."
"No, you seem cool. And your looking hot today." He said, "Ya think?" she blushed. "No, I know so." Paul was blushing a little again. Fianne had changed for the one she loved. And a week later, they were going out. He snogged her every morning.
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